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[aid] => mick
[title] => He
[time] => 2005-01-04 23:24:32
[hometext] => We are our own worst enemy!
[bodytext] => Piercing pain like that of a blade. An unseen dagger forged in darkness. A figure floats before me mocking my every move. In one hand he cluctches something darker then he. Something unseen. He laughs at my fear and grins when I frown. Yet he knows he is a part of me and I a part of he!
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He
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dreagun
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Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 11:24:32 PM in AEST
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Piercing pain like that of a blade. An unseen dagger forged in darkness. A figure floats before me mocking my every move. In one hand he cluctches something darker then he. Something unseen. He laughs at my fear and grins when I frown. Yet he knows he is a part of me and I a part of he!
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Re: He
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by blacksabbath026 on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 11:51:33 PM AEST
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| very well done you did well capturing the dark sides we all have very good |
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Re: He
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 07:56:58 PM AEST
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| I dont see what you did capture..There was no real outline no formed subject here.. |
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Re: He
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by Song_of_Sarah on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 10:01:57 PM AEST
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| I love the idea that this evil creature is irreversibly intertwined with human nature. I am also interested by the weapon darker than he. Could this be the ultimate evil of the world? Could it be our deepest, darkest desires? I'd suppose that part of the terror of this darkness is that we cannot see it, even when confronted by evil. In a way it offers some hope to us as human beings. If we cannot recognize this darkest weapon, though we are stained with sin, perhaps we are not completely soiled. Even in our darkest reality, we have not fallen to a place of pure evil. |
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