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Array ( [sid] => 78491 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Sweet Revenge [time] => 2005-01-04 20:13:49 [hometext] => ya...im that angry [bodytext] => The colors of my soul will never blend
The unwanted feelings in my heart will never mend
This god damn war will never end
Oh how great it is....
The power i have, when it comes to revenge
I'd do whatever i can to make you cry
Corner you until you could no longer tell a lie
Break you down all the way to the core with just one try
HELL i'd even murder you if i had an alibi
You screwed me over one to many times
I had to pay for way to many crimes
Oh what a PRECIOUS life it is
What's lost is lost
At this rate i'll do whatever it may cost...
MAKE WAY FOR MY SWEET REVENGE!! [comments] => 5 [counter] => 214 [topic] => 6 [informant] => westcpunk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

My Sweet Revenge

Contributed by westcpunk on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 08:13:49 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

The colors of my soul will never blend
The unwanted feelings in my heart will never mend
This god damn war will never end
Oh how great it is....
The power i have, when it comes to revenge
I'd do whatever i can to make you cry
Corner you until you could no longer tell a lie
Break you down all the way to the core with just one try
HELL i'd even murder you if i had an alibi
You screwed me over one to many times
I had to pay for way to many crimes
Oh what a PRECIOUS life it is
What's lost is lost
At this rate i'll do whatever it may cost...
MAKE WAY FOR MY SWEET REVENGE!!

Copyright © westcpunk ... [ 2005-01-04 20:13:49]
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Re: My Sweet Revenge (User Rating: 1 )
by Riot_Girl on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 08:30:20 PM AEST
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***** GREAT POEM DUDE!! ***** awesome, u should listen to My Chemical Romance, your poem reminds me of their songs, latea!
~Riot Girl

Re: My Sweet Revenge (User Rating: 1 )
by Mesano on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 08:42:18 PM AEST
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awesome poem.. horrible feelings...

ironic isnt it?

hope everything goes okay...

-Nicki

Re: My Sweet Revenge (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 09:32:11 PM AEST
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well you show that you are that angry very well. wonderfully written, and very expressive as its fueled by anger. but anger and depression can burn holes through your soul for emptiness to fill them and take its toll. i have to leave a poetic comment every once in a while, bear with me.

Re: My Sweet Revenge (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 12:27:13 AM AEST
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Intense

Re: My Sweet Revenge (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 04:39:02 PM AEST
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great poem girl.
bout time you got your butt back here :P
angry a bit are we? lol
great write. i liked the anger it seeped with.
loved this.
Becky

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