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Array ( [sid] => 78482 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What the Hell Were you Thinking? [time] => 2005-01-04 19:39:57 [hometext] => I wrote this a few weeks ago. It needs work but at the time I had to just write it. I was angry. [bodytext] => What the hell were you thinking
who do think I am
what gives you the right
to steal my peace
to steal a piece of me
a piece of my dignity
a piece of my trust
what the hell were you thinking
how could you do that to another human being
how can you live with yourself
do you realize what you've done to me
how you've made me feel
my mind a mass of angry confusion
what the hell were you thinking
I'm not a piece of meat
I'm a human being
with a brain and a heart, not just a body
if only you could feel what I feel
if only you knew what you've done
what the hell were you thinking
my mistake, you weren't
but you know what
you will not destroy me
I am strong and I will overcome

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What the Hell Were you Thinking?

Contributed by poetmarie on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 07:39:57 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

What the hell were you thinking
who do think I am
what gives you the right
to steal my peace
to steal a piece of me
a piece of my dignity
a piece of my trust
what the hell were you thinking
how could you do that to another human being
how can you live with yourself
do you realize what you've done to me
how you've made me feel
my mind a mass of angry confusion
what the hell were you thinking
I'm not a piece of meat
I'm a human being
with a brain and a heart, not just a body
if only you could feel what I feel
if only you knew what you've done
what the hell were you thinking
my mistake, you weren't
but you know what
you will not destroy me
I am strong and I will overcome

Nothing else to say.

Copyright © poetmarie ... [ 2005-01-04 19:39:57]
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Re: What the Hell Were you Thinking? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 07:43:07 PM AEST
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Whoo! Strong emotion there. Yeah, I think you meant "who do YOU think I am" on the second line. Still, it's the poem of a survivor. Good write!

Re: What the Hell Were you Thinking? (User Rating: 1 )
by declinefoale on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 07:43:54 PM AEST
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wow, i hope the person who made you say angry doesn't run it to you anytime soon....

Re: What the Hell Were you Thinking? (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 11:42:40 PM AEST
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WHOA.... that was great.. made me think... keep up the good work...

Re: What the Hell Were you Thinking? (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 07:38:22 AM AEST
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this is powerful and honest sorry 4 your pain hope
all goes well soon 4 u verry nice writting . . .

Dorian Chambers

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