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[sid] => 78336
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[aid] => mick
[title] => again i don't matter
[time] => 2005-01-03 20:01:59
[hometext] => this is my feelings with my relationships
[bodytext] => Pretending its ok
dying inside
desiring true love
going to the ends of the earth for one i love
only to find nothing matters with me in the end
don't worry
nothing works
nothing lasts
nothings stable
nothing happens
but i get left
Jenni
[comments] => 11
[counter] => 604
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[informant] => PhantomVampyress
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
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[score] => 15
[ratings] => 3
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Lifepoems
)
again i don't matter
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 08:01:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Pretending its ok
dying inside
desiring true love
going to the ends of the earth for one i love
only to find nothing matters with me in the end
don't worry
nothing works
nothing lasts
nothings stable
nothing happens
but i get left
Jenni
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Re: again i don't matter
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by EverlastingDawn on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 08:27:51 PM AEST
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| Short, but sweet. The poem uses an interesting format, one I've never seen before. Nice write |
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Re: again i don't matter
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by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 09:30:05 PM AEST
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| Are you reading my mind and writing to someone I know? great write.. |
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Re: again i don't matter
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 02:56:26 AM AEST
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Jen this is such a sad write, you'll always matter to us hun. Be strong.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: again i don't matter
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 05:18:56 AM AEST
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yes as Jane said you DO matter to us all, dont forget that hun *hugs* deep and emotional poem, sorry for your hurt and pain,
pixie xx |
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Re: again i don't matter
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 12:10:27 AM AEST
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| WOW YOU NEED TO TALK TO HIM AND LET HIM NOW HOW YOU FEEL |
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Re: again i don't matter
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 02:15:53 PM AEST
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Jenni
Sad write,but the bright side is that many of us out here in cyber-space love the hell out of you.
Sinned |
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Re: again i don't matter
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by ForeverAlone on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 12:50:46 AM AEST
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Yes you may get left...but true love should not need much effort..great job again.
Clark |
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Re: again i don't matter
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by liquidsunshine on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 03:01:00 PM AEST
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Complete turnaround from what I last read... it seems you've left all your strength behind when it comes to love...
So what if you've had a few stink bombs in the past? I thought you were all about moving on to something else... I'm not saying the next one's going to be great, but eventually that will be the case. Don't be discouraged, Jenni.
Lots of love and peace,
Chelsea |
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Re: again i don't matter
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by tx_graffiti_gal on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 04:26:07 PM AEST
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| do you want me to cry.... about to. many miles you walk and find yourself on rocky roads. and then all of a sudden there before you is a smooth surface and there and only then you will find the one to love and love you . when you at least expect it. |
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Re: again i don't matter
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 05:53:23 AM AEST
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Aw...Jennittude....you wrote this a while back so hope it's still not the same.
Again, a very awesome write and filled with emotion...which I could most certainluy feel while reading and can definitely relate.
Great job!!!
Take care,
Tim
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Re: again i don't matter
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th March 2008 @ 03:30:58 PM AEST
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What a powerful little poem, you are in rare form here, i like it though, it sad yet it reveals
very exquisitly the fragile artist living inside
you. As always, uniquely you . . .
Ben |
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