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Array ( [sid] => 78089 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Look Back Just Once [time] => 2005-01-01 21:16:57 [hometext] => To anyone who has lost someone deeply close to them (bf/gf) [bodytext] => I fall to the ground with my fists and teeth clenched,
Like putting salt in an open wound.
It hurts, stings, and makes me nauseous,
Just to see you walk away and not look back.
I loved you, helped you, and I cared for you when
No one else would. What happened with those
Happy, fun, and exciting times?
When will you look back and see me
In pain, and the burning tears running down my face?
Will that make you feel better?
To see me in pain, and just leave me here, in Solitude?
Or do you just leave when someone cares for you deeply?
You keep walking like nothing happened between us.
While Im still on the ground with my fists and teeth clenched,
And my face is scared with the tears you let loose.
Please look back and see me again.
Give me another chance to be with you, love you
And care for you again. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 254 [topic] => 22 [informant] => twitch06 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Look Back Just Once

Contributed by twitch06 on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 09:16:57 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I fall to the ground with my fists and teeth clenched,
Like putting salt in an open wound.
It hurts, stings, and makes me nauseous,
Just to see you walk away and not look back.
I loved you, helped you, and I cared for you when
No one else would. What happened with those
Happy, fun, and exciting times?
When will you look back and see me
In pain, and the burning tears running down my face?
Will that make you feel better?
To see me in pain, and just leave me here, in Solitude?
Or do you just leave when someone cares for you deeply?
You keep walking like nothing happened between us.
While Im still on the ground with my fists and teeth clenched,
And my face is scared with the tears you let loose.
Please look back and see me again.
Give me another chance to be with you, love you
And care for you again.

Copyright © twitch06 ... [ 2005-01-01 21:16:57]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Look Back Just Once (User Rating: 1 )
by StrwBrryStrBrst0225 on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 09:25:07 PM AEST
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I feel like crying.. but then again i have always been pathetic like that.... my bf cheated on me and thats basicly how i felt
(your poem) And i woulda have done anything for him, he was my everything and he just watched me suffer, and i just let it happen.... : ( i'm sorry i'll stop talking bout it.... nice poem I liked it , thankz for the write

Re: Look Back Just Once (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 09:52:51 PM AEST
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this is a very sad write but a very good one .. Yeah i know this feeling well so i can relate.. someday you will meet the right one.. i think everything happens for a reason sometimes we don't understand the reasons but i guess we all will later on.. im feeling that way now myself so i understand you very much and i hope you can get past this and better days are ahead for you

Peace and hope
JENNI

Re: Look Back Just Once (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 10:12:46 PM AEST
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Dont wait.....

Umang.

Re: Look Back Just Once (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 12:30:59 AM AEST
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Agonizing yet beautifully written.
A masterpeice 'cause u paint this word picture very well. Reminds me of my self when I was mucho younger. great1
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
I pray u get yor hearts desire if it be God's will.

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