Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	03-June 08:47:34 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 78054 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => *+Overdrive Velocity-*: Acoustic Demo (teaser) [time] => 2005-01-01 16:33:52 [hometext] => This was only one poem in a series I wrote called Overdrive Velocity. [bodytext] =>

Overdrive Velocity acoustic demo by Ghost Moth it's still early in my dreams and the spiders catch all the tangled signals vibrating thru the tremorings of distorted frequencies of dismantled burnt out parts of me hotwired and unplugged, disconnected, broken-up and bugged you're right, i don't hear you can't you see i don't want to tuned out too long eyes snowed over by the song played by a mind for deaf ears is a sign of life one man hears frustrated with the noise of animosity destroyed in the surging overdrive velocity that left me here in the glow of the light from my radio can't you see i'm right where i want to be close to the music inside the overdrive velocity

copyright 2004 the Ghost Moth
[comments] => 8 [counter] => 256 [topic] => 34 [informant] => the_Ghost_Moth [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 91 [ratings] => 19 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

*+Overdrive Velocity-*: Acoustic Demo (teaser)

Contributed by the_Ghost_Moth on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 04:33:52 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Overdrive Velocity acoustic demo by Ghost Moth it's still early in my dreams and the spiders catch all the tangled signals vibrating thru the tremorings of distorted frequencies of dismantled burnt out parts of me hotwired and unplugged, disconnected, broken-up and bugged you're right, i don't hear you can't you see i don't want to tuned out too long eyes snowed over by the song played by a mind for deaf ears is a sign of life one man hears frustrated with the noise of animosity destroyed in the surging overdrive velocity that left me here in the glow of the light from my radio can't you see i'm right where i want to be close to the music inside the overdrive velocity

copyright 2004 the Ghost Moth

Copyright © the_Ghost_Moth ... [ 2005-01-01 16:33:52]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: *+Overdrive Velocity-*: Acoustic Demo (teaser) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 04:43:59 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Taking a break from my site redo to look over your poem, Mothy. This is a good write. "frustrated with the noise of animosity" is my favorite line in here and something I feel all too often lately. Hope more postive feelings come to your surface.
Cheers!
J.

Re: *+Overdrive Velocity-*: Acoustic Demo (teaser) (User Rating: 1 )
by eyesxcriedxout1989 on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 04:44:43 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

This series now has my full attention...Excellence in it's highest form

Mason

Re: *+Overdrive Velocity-*: Acoustic Demo (teaser) (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 10:41:05 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

one word WOW!!!! :)
pixie xx

Re: *+Overdrive Velocity-*: Acoustic Demo (teaser) (User Rating: 1 )
by cuddlytiger17 on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 09:31:03 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Oh i really liked this one as well! It draws you in right from the start and doesn't fail to keep
you longing for more. A fast-paced read, and
great at that. I liked the lines:
"and the spiders catch all the tangled signals
vibrating thru the tremorings
of distorted frequencies"
I can't wait for more! You hooked me from the
start and never fail to amaze me. =)

Re: *+Overdrive Velocity-*: Acoustic Demo (teaser) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 09:54:37 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Hmnn.

I'm getting Mad Max on that lorry . . . wind in his matted hair . . . mad stare in his eyes . . .

Cool.

Re: *+Overdrive Velocity-*: Acoustic Demo (teaser) (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 06:56:36 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Gee Em ... ? Dude, you Rrrrrrrrrock !!!
I wouldn't change a thing.

Nazzy ~

Re: *+Overdrive Velocity-*: Acoustic Demo (teaser) (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 08:47:29 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I know this is a little late... But I wanted to tell you this was hot! I loved the way you composed it. It flowed so perfectly. Your writing definately has the power to take me somewhere else. Not many people can do that... You are, as I have said before, very talented! Loves ya! XOXOXOXOX

Re: *+Overdrive Velocity-*: Acoustic Demo (teaser) (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 09:25:33 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

If this is not a song I can make it into one. Let me know. Awesome write. I wished you'd post more poetry. You are an awesome writer.

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com