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A vacuum of silent rage fills the line,
You don’t want help do you?
You are angry and want revenge,
For your aging bones,
For being made redundant by a ruthless society,
For being lost in a world of eroding values.
For being unappreciated and unloved,
For the impotence to change.
The buck stops here,
“Crook, Charlatan, Gangster?”,
A reservation for the hottest place in hell,
Made just for me?
If only I could explain how I was sorry,
That you are so deeply unhappy,
By working together,
We can rise above this,
Human error occurs,
Resolution strengthens the sole,
Maybe this is the first step in our evolution as people,
We could unite and overcome,
Connect in a very real why,
Enlightened beings searching for solutions,
In a world riddled by obstacles,
Blinded by rage you miss this,
I know all you need is a great big hug,
Unfortunately company policy does not permit me to give you one without your Account number.
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Ode to a Disgruntled Customer

Contributed by blackevar on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 07:54:51 PM in AEST
Topic: hbadday

Emphasise? Certainly. How can I help you?
A vacuum of silent rage fills the line,
You don’t want help do you?
You are angry and want revenge,
For your aging bones,
For being made redundant by a ruthless society,
For being lost in a world of eroding values.
For being unappreciated and unloved,
For the impotence to change.
The buck stops here,
“Crook, Charlatan, Gangster?”,
A reservation for the hottest place in hell,
Made just for me?
If only I could explain how I was sorry,
That you are so deeply unhappy,
By working together,
We can rise above this,
Human error occurs,
Resolution strengthens the sole,
Maybe this is the first step in our evolution as people,
We could unite and overcome,
Connect in a very real why,
Enlightened beings searching for solutions,
In a world riddled by obstacles,
Blinded by rage you miss this,
I know all you need is a great big hug,
Unfortunately company policy does not permit me to give you one without your Account number.

Copyright Â© blackevar ... [ 2004-12-30 19:54:51]
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Re: Ode to a Disgruntled Customer (User Rating: 1 )
by the_Ghost_Moth on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 08:19:27 PM AEST
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Hey, this is good stuff.

I liked the second line
"a vacuum of silent rage fills the line"

I knew this was gonna be good.

--Ghosty

Re: Ode to a Disgruntled Customer (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 10:31:26 PM AEST
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lol. i agree with ghost moth. i loved the ending, it was priceless.

Re: Ode to a Disgruntled Customer (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 08:11:33 AM AEST
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I really like this. Did you mean sole or soul?
Stitch

Re: Ode to a Disgruntled Customer (User Rating: 1 )
by Blackevar on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 10:02:07 AM AEST
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Soul, oops.

Re: Ode to a Disgruntled Customer (User Rating: 1 )
by darkplaidbabe on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 01:20:03 PM AEST
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another great write...i especially liked the last line..
PM me anytime
~Kreamy

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