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Array ( [sid] => 77789 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Run [time] => 2004-12-30 16:44:32 [hometext] => My first poem I've ever written...English HW in 1998...comments are most definitely welcome [bodytext] => Run, run, run
Far away
For I don’t want to see you
Come my way

Keep your grief
To yourself
For grief should stay
In one’s self

Your grief and mine
Must not intertwine
Like vinegar and oil
Not meant to coil

I don’t want to burden you
With problems I may have
Because by not telling you
I want you to be glad

I see no point
In sharing with you
For only talking about it
I still stay blue
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 61 [informant] => O7NeVeS [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Run

Contributed by O7NeVeS on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 04:44:32 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Run, run, run
Far away
For I don’t want to see you
Come my way

Keep your grief
To yourself
For grief should stay
In one’s self

Your grief and mine
Must not intertwine
Like vinegar and oil
Not meant to coil

I don’t want to burden you
With problems I may have
Because by not telling you
I want you to be glad

I see no point
In sharing with you
For only talking about it
I still stay blue

Copyright Â© O7NeVeS ... [ 2004-12-30 16:44:32]
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Re: Run (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 05:49:28 PM AEST
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Very well written, especally for a first write! Hope to see more of your work!

Re: Run (User Rating: 1 )
by Dec2three198five on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 11:23:54 PM AEST
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very nice poem. i think i get what the poem is trying to say but not really quite sure. 33

Re: Run (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:55:32 AM AEST
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this is impressive for the first poem you ever wrote, i hope your teacher recognized it too :) now we know how you got started with this wonderful hobby, its great isn't it?? nice one....

Curtis

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