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Array ( [sid] => 77674 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Like you needed me [time] => 2004-12-29 18:19:12 [hometext] => I don't know if people will like this poem, but its sorta important to me cos' that day was amazing to me...when it seemed like he needed me. I may sound obsessive to some people, and I suppose I am. Comments appreciated. [bodytext] => A cold winter afternoon
I sit at the window seat
I hold my legs in tight
And curl my little feet
I look out of my window
Watch the rain and while I do
My mind wanders to happy times
To memories of you

I remember how you laughed
When I tickled your feet
I remember how I loved
Your picky-backs along the street
I remember how one time
You looked at me and smiled
I never knew why but whatever I did
It was definitely worthwhile

I remember how your tender
Skin felt like on my hand
I remember how you
Could always understand
I remember how one time
You touched me longingly
Like you wished I was yours to keep
Like you needed me

I come back to looking out my window
And as I watch the rain drop
"You never really needed me" I say
And although Im trying to forget
I will always remember how you touched
And looked at me that day
Like you needed me


[comments] => 4 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Kitty_cat [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Like you needed me

Contributed by Kitty_cat on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 06:19:12 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



A cold winter afternoon
I sit at the window seat
I hold my legs in tight
And curl my little feet
I look out of my window
Watch the rain and while I do
My mind wanders to happy times
To memories of you

I remember how you laughed
When I tickled your feet
I remember how I loved
Your picky-backs along the street
I remember how one time
You looked at me and smiled
I never knew why but whatever I did
It was definitely worthwhile

I remember how your tender
Skin felt like on my hand
I remember how you
Could always understand
I remember how one time
You touched me longingly
Like you wished I was yours to keep
Like you needed me

I come back to looking out my window
And as I watch the rain drop
"You never really needed me" I say
And although Im trying to forget
I will always remember how you touched
And looked at me that day
Like you needed me






Copyright © Kitty_cat ... [ 2004-12-29 18:19:12]
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Re: Like you needed me (User Rating: 1 )
by Naughtygurl on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 07:23:49 PM AEST
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Wow.. i know I sound pathetic but i like this poem and i think i mite cry.... cuz this reminds me of sumthin that happened resently , i loved this guy and he cheated on me iono why ur poem made me think of him, but i loved this poem still so keep writing plz

~__Muffin__~


Re: Like you needed me (User Rating: 1 )
by killingmehslowly on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 08:04:47 PM AEST
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ah yes. I can relate. It's hard to forget someone you care so strongly for, especially when you seemed so close. And at times like you could be perfect for each other. My feelings weren't as strong as yours though, and you expressed yours well. Thus I really like this poem. It's excellent. -Sami-


Re: Like you needed me (User Rating: 1 )
by Dri on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 08:23:00 PM AEST
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yeah... sometimes my memories get to be a bit much...
this poem did a good job expressing that, keep up the good work!!


Re: Like you needed me (User Rating: 1 )
by fastpitchqt on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 04:07:14 PM AEST
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very nice poem...ive felt this way before! it sux. check out my stuff sometime and lemme know what u think!! keep up the writing!




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