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So I flirted back, naturally
I said you had better watch what it is that you say
Please Baby please, don’t test me in any way
But you ignored it, and continued on
Of course by then, my conscience was gone
Girlfriend or not, I wanted you
You wanted the same because of the things you would do
Many a night, I wished you were mine.
So I had thought, all in due time
You were single, but of course I was not
And just that thought, had made me so hot
That’s when I dropped the one I was with
Because it was you who I wanted to be with
You look at me, and all I can do is smile
For you I would walk, the extra mile.
But of course that didn’t matter
Cuz it was you who made my heart shatter
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Ups and Downs

Contributed by O7NeVeS on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 09:43:16 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

From day one, you flirted with me
So I flirted back, naturally
I said you had better watch what it is that you say
Please Baby please, don’t test me in any way
But you ignored it, and continued on
Of course by then, my conscience was gone
Girlfriend or not, I wanted you
You wanted the same because of the things you would do
Many a night, I wished you were mine.
So I had thought, all in due time
You were single, but of course I was not
And just that thought, had made me so hot
That’s when I dropped the one I was with
Because it was you who I wanted to be with
You look at me, and all I can do is smile
For you I would walk, the extra mile.
But of course that didn’t matter
Cuz it was you who made my heart shatter

Copyright Â© O7NeVeS ... [ 2004-12-28 21:43:16]
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Re: Ups and Downs (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 09:58:25 PM AEST
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Wow...I love it! I can so relate.
Great job.

Re: Ups and Downs (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Callif on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 01:17:21 AM AEST
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i feel for ya man, great poem

Re: Ups and Downs (User Rating: 1 )
by breny on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 09:05:39 PM AEST
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that sux. you gave up your boyfriend and everything and in the end you ended up with no one. i have had nightmares like that :-/ anyways great poem :-D
*Bren*

Re: Ups and Downs (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 12:00:10 AM AEST
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Oh gosh,love is strange sometimes! If you knew how many mistakes I've done,and I kinda was like you before,always falling in love with the wrong guys,but you'll see,one day,what goes around,comes around.You'll find that great guy and always remember that past relationships permit us to expand and teach us things important for our futur relationships.Great write,
PumpkinPie

Re: Ups and Downs (User Rating: 1 )
by Dec2three198five on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 11:16:59 PM AEST
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WOW, can i relate to that 110% but i wasn't with someone, she was with someone. Good one. 33

Re: Ups and Downs (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 02:03:56 AM AEST
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i think everyone can relate a little to this one, the sacrafices we make for some people :) great job, im gettin kinda tired but im goin for the home run here :)

Curtis

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