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Array ( [sid] => 77484 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Clear Mind [time] => 2004-12-28 04:50:08 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The pain is no rush to me
for I am familiar with misery

It's over now
I have hurt so many
When I'm gone
no hurt will be felt by any

They don't deserve what I've done
Now please, Give me back my gun

Now please
let me explain
to no one more
shall I cause any pain

Give it back
to me now please
so that their pain
may start to ease

Don't make me take it,
I will use force
Now let me kill
this dying horse

For I am a beast
and nothing more
For this life I have
I have no need for

This life
the one that I live
I take too much
and I never give

This has brought me
to my end
Let everyone's pains
start to mend

In my end,
there is beggining
Everyone involved
will be winning

I get to leave
my troubles behind
Now give it back
So I may clear my mind [comments] => 3 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 36 [informant] => crash [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Clear Mind

Contributed by crash on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 04:50:08 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

The pain is no rush to me
for I am familiar with misery

It's over now
I have hurt so many
When I'm gone
no hurt will be felt by any

They don't deserve what I've done
Now please, Give me back my gun

Now please
let me explain
to no one more
shall I cause any pain

Give it back
to me now please
so that their pain
may start to ease

Don't make me take it,
I will use force
Now let me kill
this dying horse

For I am a beast
and nothing more
For this life I have
I have no need for

This life
the one that I live
I take too much
and I never give

This has brought me
to my end
Let everyone's pains
start to mend

In my end,
there is beggining
Everyone involved
will be winning

I get to leave
my troubles behind
Now give it back
So I may clear my mind

Copyright © crash ... [ 2004-12-28 04:50:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Clear Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Sapphire_Blue on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 04:58:17 AM AEST
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So much loss and sadness, yet written very emotionally, dont give up the fight for life, find something to hold on to, cool poem, painting a very vivid picture.

Re: Clear Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by EternalNight4x on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 02:57:19 PM AEST
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excellent write. very emotional and well expressed. I can relate to this very well, keep it up

Re: Clear Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Chaos_is_apon_us on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 11:17:53 PM AEST
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This poem is very well written, though I can see better ways of self redempton than suicide. I like the emotion, the vivid picture painted in my mind, and the way you look out for others while trying to get out of yourself
Better dayz
~Jace~

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