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Array ( [sid] => 77382 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => it didnt feel right when i held someone elses hand [time] => 2004-12-27 13:30:32 [hometext] => [bodytext] => If I stitched on her smile
Would you come back to me
Or would I still be left here on my own
Watching you walk away with her in your arms
You know that when you said I ran away from you
I didn’t
I was walking slowly
And you didn’t even try to stop me
I now know I made a big mistake
And it does hurt
It hurts that you can find someone else
So much prettier than me
And when I held someone else’s hand
It didn’t feel right
If you go now
Just stay away
Keep away from my dreams
And leave me alone
Its for the best if I forget you
Cause I don’t wanna love you anymore [comments] => 4 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 22 [informant] => prozac_memory [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

it didnt feel right when i held someone elses hand

Contributed by prozac_memory on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 01:30:32 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

If I stitched on her smile
Would you come back to me
Or would I still be left here on my own
Watching you walk away with her in your arms
You know that when you said I ran away from you
I didn’t
I was walking slowly
And you didn’t even try to stop me
I now know I made a big mistake
And it does hurt
It hurts that you can find someone else
So much prettier than me
And when I held someone else’s hand
It didn’t feel right
If you go now
Just stay away
Keep away from my dreams
And leave me alone
Its for the best if I forget you
Cause I don’t wanna love you anymore

Copyright Â© prozac_memory ... [ 2004-12-27 13:30:32]
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Re: it didnt feel right when i held someone elses hand (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Wingz on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 01:43:20 PM AEST
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You emit wonderful emotion into this poem. I know exactly what it is like to feel that way. Be strong, it will get better.

Great write,

Krystal-Dawn

Re: it didnt feel right when i held someone elses hand (User Rating: 1 )
by smooshable on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 02:39:20 PM AEST
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"If I stitched on her smile"

Don't know exactly why that cut me as much as it did but its very very powerful. I guess just thinking that your true love, could find someone else so easily.... yea, I know that hurts. Any poem that captures and can transfer pain to the reader as well as this is just incredible. You've tapped into a line of emotion that I think a lot of people will respond to. Great poem.

Re: it didnt feel right when i held someone elses hand (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 03:50:33 PM AEST
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Powerful write. Awesome job!

Re: it didnt feel right when i held someone elses hand (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 07:04:51 AM AEST
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You have captured these feelings with both simplicity and finesse.
Stitch

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