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[sid] => 76993
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Death's List
[time] => 2004-12-23 02:40:48
[hometext] => i wrote this poem and i left it on my bed cause i knew my mom would look cause i wanted help but i didnt know what to do i didnt know how to tell her so i just wrote this cause this is how i feel and what i tried doing
[bodytext] => People I told,told me not to do it
I cant help it,My body needs it
No one understands me
Why Does this have to be?
I'm depressed belive it or not
Just cause I seem happy alot
I'm not, I think of horrible things all the time
I tried to think happy,I tried to set the line
I just cant anymore I cant fake this
I wanna give you one last kiss
Becuase Im gonna slit my wrist
I'm next on deaths list
See you on the other side
If god'll let me pass,after all the times i lied,
Sorry I have to go,
Becuse Im gonna slit my wirst
I'm next on deaths list,
[comments] => 7
[counter] => 230
[topic] => 36
[informant] => sick_n_twisted
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 4
[ratings] => 1
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Suicide
)
Death's List
Contributed by
sick_n_twisted
on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 02:40:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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People I told,told me not to do it
I cant help it,My body needs it
No one understands me
Why Does this have to be?
I'm depressed belive it or not
Just cause I seem happy alot
I'm not, I think of horrible things all the time
I tried to think happy,I tried to set the line
I just cant anymore I cant fake this
I wanna give you one last kiss
Becuase Im gonna slit my wrist
I'm next on deaths list
See you on the other side
If god'll let me pass,after all the times i lied,
Sorry I have to go,
Becuse Im gonna slit my wirst
I'm next on deaths list,
Copyright ©
sick_n_twisted
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2004-12-23 02:40:48]
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Re: Death's List
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by Stonedraider23 on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 02:51:59 AM AEST
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| good write but dont do it ur body dont need it its ur mind that needs it but yea see u over there |
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Re: Death's List
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by Loyalist on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 02:58:55 AM AEST
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| You have outstanding abilities to express your feelings in verse. Now it is up to you to learn how to do it through normal means. Sometimes it is best to just open the door and just speak your mind to people no matter what. If you are dead, you'll never be able to speak you mind again and no one will have the chance or opportunity to try and understand you. Yesterday is gone, today is here, you can change tomorrow. All you have to do it try. Thank you for reading my opinion. |
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Re: Death's List
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by TaintedSoul on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 09:17:37 AM AEST
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There are times when those of us need help, and we scream and shout for it, only to find that our pleas fall on deaf ears. To write about this is therapy, me thinks. It's when we lock it all away, out of sight ... that's when we need to worry. Too many times I've been there. I truly hope you get the help you cry out for.
peace
TS |
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Re: Death's List
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by LevyMetal on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 04:12:25 PM AEST
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| Interesting way to get your words across to your mother. If your mother was so persistant to read through your things that you leave "laying around", im sure she obviously cares enough to help you. Great poem, love the title. *thumbs up* |
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Re: Death's List
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by biggredd on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 04:12:39 PM AEST
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I absolutely agree with loyalist. I think you have an amazing ability to express yourself through what you write, and it'd be a shame to lose someone as talented as you. And I do understand where you're coming from, I feel the same way you do. I've been there many times myself. Just know that you aren't alone and that sometimes we have to force people to see the pain and to listen to us. Don't give up.
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Re: Death's List
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by BabyFacedAngel2010 on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 08:11:45 PM AEST
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I'm with you only differnce is if I let my mom know I'll have to have a consler and I dont want to talk anyhing out I do it alot as well and Its hard to stop and think but your the better person to let your mom know...
Read Some Of Mine Please...
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Re: Death's List
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by sick_n_twisted on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 11:11:08 PM AEST
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| HEY GUYS!!! Thank You so much!!! for commenting on my poem i was sooo excited to hear from you guys cause this is my first time posting my poems on a website and i didnt think i was any good and theres alot of readers also thx for taking the time to comment and/or reading my poem thank you sooo much again!!! |
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