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Array ( [sid] => 76820 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dreaming [time] => 2004-12-21 22:29:23 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I lay awake at night
Thinking about you
Wanting to dream about you
Laying awake whispering to you
Thinking about the way you made me laugh
Wanting to kiss you
I lay here wanting to sleep
Thinking how we lived
Wanting to kiss you
Laying awake beside you
I feel I'm alone
You never talk to me any more
You never hold me
You're stone beside me
Your back cold against my chest
I push you away and sit up
I don't think this is a dream
I want to wake up
I feel your hands pulling me back
This isn't what I wanted
This dream is a nightmare


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Dreaming

Contributed by stonedraider23 on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 10:29:23 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I lay awake at night
Thinking about you
Wanting to dream about you
Laying awake whispering to you
Thinking about the way you made me laugh
Wanting to kiss you
I lay here wanting to sleep
Thinking how we lived
Wanting to kiss you
Laying awake beside you
I feel I'm alone
You never talk to me any more
You never hold me
You're stone beside me
Your back cold against my chest
I push you away and sit up
I don't think this is a dream
I want to wake up
I feel your hands pulling me back
This isn't what I wanted
This dream is a nightmare






Copyright © stonedraider23 ... [ 2004-12-21 22:29:23]
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Re: Dreaming (User Rating: 1 )
by bluebird on Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 01:30:28 AM AEST
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this is so emotionally beautifull..
dreams are a nightmare and nightmares are reality.
I hate that.but love your poem,keep it up.

~keep the faith~
Bluebird


Re: Dreaming (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 10:48:28 AM AEST
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nice write will,i really liked it,confusing but its all good,love ya


Re: Dreaming (User Rating: 1 )
by biggredd on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 07:56:38 PM AEST
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Very interesting to read. I really enjoyed this. Keep up the good work!

Bigg Redd




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