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Array ( [sid] => 76748 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Truth [time] => 2004-12-21 12:19:19 [hometext] => flowing piece about hiding the truth. please read and comment on it as i would love to see what people make of it!thankyou!! [bodytext] => Tired awakening
Of an untamed soul,
Its contrasting rage
Creates a hellhole,
It lay asleep
Untouched for years,
Until the terror starts
And raises fears,
People run
Too afraid to stay,
Whilst others scream
And look in dismay,
Its actions are bold
And especially clear,
It frightens the people
By being sincere,
For all this time
It’s been locked inside,
About to erupt
And cause a landslide,
Then when you get trapped
There’s no way out,
The truth can hurt
Don’t mess it about,
But it’s best it’s free
No longer caged,
It’ll be better
No longer enraged [comments] => 3 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 48 [informant] => sean88 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Truth

Contributed by sean88 on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:19:19 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Tired awakening
Of an untamed soul,
Its contrasting rage
Creates a hellhole,
It lay asleep
Untouched for years,
Until the terror starts
And raises fears,
People run
Too afraid to stay,
Whilst others scream
And look in dismay,
Its actions are bold
And especially clear,
It frightens the people
By being sincere,
For all this time
It’s been locked inside,
About to erupt
And cause a landslide,
Then when you get trapped
There’s no way out,
The truth can hurt
Don’t mess it about,
But it’s best it’s free
No longer caged,
It’ll be better
No longer enraged

Copyright Â© sean88 ... [ 2004-12-21 12:19:19]
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Re: Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:24:18 PM AEST
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yes, the truth, though sometimes hurtful..and hard to deal with is always best. I hate going to my psych and messing around with all that talk..the truth often hurts..
good job.

Re: Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by Red_October on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:31:32 PM AEST
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This definitely flows well, a well expressed version of wisdom. Excellent. Tiffany J. (Red_October)

Re: Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by kt88 on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 01:49:48 PM AEST
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sometimes yes the truth does hurt. sometimes it hurts so much you do want to beleive it. this is very good

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