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Array ( [sid] => 76693 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dear Santa oh please I want aqua pets this year [time] => 2004-12-21 01:42:37 [hometext] => I saw these little toys on the tely today and just fell in love with them so i wrote this poems its kinda like an extended Haiku i hope you all enjoy and read and comment and love them as much as me [bodytext] => Dear Santa oh please
I want aqua pets this year
They are so very cute
Santa please oh please may I
Please have an aqua pet
I want the one I made last
The one with pink hair
And the alien looking black eyes
It’s so so pretty
I want a few so they would
Never be alone
And dance around chirp and giggle
Dear Santa oh please
I want aqua pets this year
I promise to love
And take care of them always
Please Santa may I
Have aqua pets this year please
They are all I want

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Dear Santa oh please I want aqua pets this year

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 01:42:37 AM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry

Dear Santa oh please
I want aqua pets this year
They are so very cute
Santa please oh please may I
Please have an aqua pet
I want the one I made last
The one with pink hair
And the alien looking black eyes
It’s so so pretty
I want a few so they would
Never be alone
And dance around chirp and giggle
Dear Santa oh please
I want aqua pets this year
I promise to love
And take care of them always
Please Santa may I
Have aqua pets this year please
They are all I want

http://www.3djoe.com/Merchant2/merchant.mvc?Screen=CTGY&Category_Code=WPTAP

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Re: Dear Santa oh please I want aqua pets this year (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 01:50:05 AM AEST
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Very cute,it made me smile. What are aqua pets?

Re: Dear Santa oh please I want aqua pets this year (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 01:58:46 AM AEST
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awww so cute just as cute as aqua pets themselves.........

Re: Dear Santa oh please I want aqua pets this year (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 02:32:53 AM AEST
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LMAO DP i love this, i remember when i saw them on the shop there just so cute, such a great write. I love it.

Hugs,
Jane x

Re: Dear Santa oh please I want aqua pets this year (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 06:30:35 AM AEST
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awwww how sweet and cute, a lovely write
pixie xx

Re: Dear Santa oh please I want aqua pets this year (User Rating: 1 )
by BEBE on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 05:27:33 PM AEST
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awww This is a very cute and sweet writting.
nice work :)

Re: Dear Santa oh please I want aqua pets this year (User Rating: 1 )
by TaintedSoul on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 07:26:18 PM AEST
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Cute write! Aqua Pets are cute little critters. For some reason I was reminded of All I Want For Chrismas Is My Two Front Teeth! With a twist of course. Christmas makes for some interesting poetry, both light and dark. Thanks for bringing a smile to my otherwise sour face this evening.

peace
TS

Re: Dear Santa oh please I want aqua pets this year (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 05:26:45 PM AEST
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very nice tone, very childlike. i dont even know what an aqualpet is, im afraid i might want one.

Re: Dear Santa oh please I want aqua pets this year (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 12:02:43 AM AEST
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Do you really? LOL.. I want world peace..rotflmao. Fat chance.. I went to see th Fockers.. don't ask!!!!!

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