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[sid] => 76537
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => The Lost Collection
[time] => 2004-12-20 02:34:16
[hometext] => ... If only the message could reach them... my mind would be at ease. Sorry for the inconvenience . Corrupted_minds
[bodytext] => I’m lost,
Can’t find my way home,
Don’t know if I wanna,
I’m lost,
Left all alone,
Don’t know if I’m gonna,
Someone find me and lead me to shelter,
Away from the darkness of night,
Somebody find me and lead me to shelter,
Away from this hideous sight,
The ones I called my friends,
Are the watchful eyes that judge me,
No matter what I do,
They only see what they wanna see,
I only do what they see me do,
I only say what they hear me say,
Not a word I say is spoken,
Neither is it heard
People just pass judgement,
Without a thought of affect,
Even if the judgement is false,
To them it seems correct,
Cussed words are just meaningless,
Until they’re pointed at you,
No one cares if it’s lies,
Because to them they think it’s true
Until it’s placed like this,
The truth is overrated,
I’m just the repulsive beast,
Our societies created,
Destructive words are thrown about,
“You *****en sluttish hoe”
“You could slit your wrists and kill yourself”
“And no body would know”
‘A Friend’
Couldn’t define the word,
Cos they’ve always been a lie,
I’m still stuck in denial,
Because if I wasn’t I’d just cry,
I’ll try not to generalize,
I’m still stuck on this earth,
I’m bleeding on the inside,
For all that it is worth,
I’m walking around bare naked,
Two daggers in my back,
The ones that my “friends” left there,
And my hearts begun to crack,
Sorry
“Sorry” when seen
“Sorry” when spoken
“Sorry” when heard
“Sorry” when broken
I’m sorry I didn’t notice,
I didn’t take a clue,
I painted my heart red,
When I should have made it blue,
I thought that I was alone now,
But that thought of mine was wrong,
I’m still hated and misjudged now,
But I was alone all along
I’m crying on the inside,
The tears trickle down slow,
Just dying on the inside
And nobody cares to know
[comments] => 9
[counter] => 292
[topic] => 48
[informant] => corrupted_minds
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 4
[ratings] => 1
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => EmotionalPoetry
)
The Lost Collection
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 02:34:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I’m lost,
Can’t find my way home,
Don’t know if I wanna,
I’m lost,
Left all alone,
Don’t know if I’m gonna,
Someone find me and lead me to shelter,
Away from the darkness of night,
Somebody find me and lead me to shelter,
Away from this hideous sight,
The ones I called my friends,
Are the watchful eyes that judge me,
No matter what I do,
They only see what they wanna see,
I only do what they see me do,
I only say what they hear me say,
Not a word I say is spoken,
Neither is it heard
People just pass judgement,
Without a thought of affect,
Even if the judgement is false,
To them it seems correct,
Cussed words are just meaningless,
Until they’re pointed at you,
No one cares if it’s lies,
Because to them they think it’s true
Until it’s placed like this,
The truth is overrated,
I’m just the repulsive beast,
Our societies created,
Destructive words are thrown about,
“You *****en sluttish hoe”
“You could slit your wrists and kill yourself”
“And no body would know”
‘A Friend’
Couldn’t define the word,
Cos they’ve always been a lie,
I’m still stuck in denial,
Because if I wasn’t I’d just cry,
I’ll try not to generalize,
I’m still stuck on this earth,
I’m bleeding on the inside,
For all that it is worth,
I’m walking around bare naked,
Two daggers in my back,
The ones that my “friends” left there,
And my hearts begun to crack,
Sorry
“Sorry” when seen
“Sorry” when spoken
“Sorry” when heard
“Sorry” when broken
I’m sorry I didn’t notice,
I didn’t take a clue,
I painted my heart red,
When I should have made it blue,
I thought that I was alone now,
But that thought of mine was wrong,
I’m still hated and misjudged now,
But I was alone all along
I’m crying on the inside,
The tears trickle down slow,
Just dying on the inside
And nobody cares to know
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corrupted_minds
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2004-12-20 02:34:16]
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Re: The Lost Collection
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by bluebird on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 02:41:53 AM AEST
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this is definately not an inconvenience!! this is a great write and by the sounds of it they should know exactly how you feel. dont let your 'friends' get away with the pain they have caused you.
~keepthefaith~
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Re: The Lost Collection
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by TaintedSoul on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 06:33:04 AM AEST
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A true blue friend is someone who does not judge who they call 'friend'. But most of all, we must first be our own friend. Heartfelt write.
peace
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Re: The Lost Collection
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by brew on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 08:43:06 AM AEST
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Friends are rare and true......especially the BEST ones. its hard to keep true ones.......but they always shine in the heart , no matter the inconvience of all. Nice, deep write.!
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Re: The Lost Collection
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 11:36:01 PM AEST
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This is really awesome. Shows how you are feeling pretty well. I can relate to some of it especially this part:
‘A Friend’
Couldn’t define the word,
Cos they’ve always been a lie,
Great write. I hope things get better for you and your friends.
Spazzo |
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Re: The Lost Collection
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by cj_ranson on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 03:39:31 AM AEST
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| All these people who write comments, I feel that you are lying to them, in all these poems you paint a picture of your life in the saddest way, and that sad life I can't seem to see. But I guess just because I think this doesn't mean I'm right, I mean I don't really know you all that great loretta. |
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Re: The Lost Collection
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by cj_ranson on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 03:51:07 AM AEST
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| sorry i didnt finish my last comment. It's not than that no one cares about you, you seclude yourself as if you are better than everyone else, which is entirely untrue. Please take a look at yourself, please change. Allow good things to happen, and don't make stupid mistakes like you have. Anywho, nice poem i spose. |
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Re: The Lost Collection
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by Row on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 07:31:05 AM AEST
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| yeah, what sean said |
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Re: The Lost Collection
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by Dizza_13 on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 08:04:04 PM AEST
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im not sure wat i can say. I was goin 2 write some
superficial line about your notes or something that
is near to meaningless but i think the best thing i can do is tell u that im always here if u need 2 talk. i guess i just need 2 tell u that u have some true friends and i like 2 think that i am one of them. dont forget who your real friends are because they will never leave ur side. dont forget that ur are such a great friend and i love u, i know i go overboard but its true. there are so many people out there who feel the same way and i hope u know who they are. im always here if u need 2 talk
love always,
diz
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Re: The Lost Collection
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by cj_ranson on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 04:24:13 AM AEST
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wooooo
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