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Array ( [sid] => 76123 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Rose Maker [time] => 2004-12-16 23:48:04 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The Rose Maker

There's the rose
the petal
the stem
the thorn

The rose grower
rose picker
rose giver
rose taker
rose caregiver

There's the thorn grower
the thorn picker
the thorn giver
the thorn caretaker

but, He's the Rose Maker

THE ROSE died because of the thorn giver

then, He rose for the Rose caregiver

AND SOON THE ROSE WILL COME AGAIN!

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The Rose Maker

Contributed by MMISS on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 11:48:04 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

The Rose Maker

There's the rose
the petal
the stem
the thorn

The rose grower
rose picker
rose giver
rose taker
rose caregiver

There's the thorn grower
the thorn picker
the thorn giver
the thorn caretaker

but, He's the Rose Maker

THE ROSE died because of the thorn giver

then, He rose for the Rose caregiver

AND SOON THE ROSE WILL COME AGAIN!

Copyright © MMISS ... [ 2004-12-16 23:48:04]
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Re: The Rose Maker (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 12:07:59 AM AEST
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I don't really understand this, but I wanted you to know that I did take the time to read and comment.. so many people read my work and just pass it by like they think it's worthless. I don't think that at all..I think I get it..but I don't want to feel stupid I guess. But at the same time I respect you and want you to know I was here. thanks for writing and posting.

Re: The Rose Maker (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 02:47:13 AM AEST
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This is good, I enjoyed reading it.

ShadowsCloud

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