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A knock out of beta stage

Contributed by euphoria on Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 11:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Lavender dreams and magic unicorns, as I close my eyes, the dark tresses and deep caresses of my imagination envelope my very existence. Amidst the trees, the winter breeze hums a merry tune, of journeys traveled by magnus seas and across the sandy dunes. Myths and legends, fables and tales, Time now hails evolution, to crack the collusion of reality. Eccentricity, beauty and affection will bring an end to this deception that we suffer from when awake. To a land of no intrigue....back to where I sleep.




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Re: A knock out of beta stage (User Rating: 1 )
by Nessiecat on Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 12:08:25 PM AEST
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This is weird reading for me. If I didn't know better, I'd say you've been in my head extracting all the best bits :).

Lovely stuff!

More please.


Re: A knock out of beta stage (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 06:50:44 PM AEST
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This has a style of it's own, it's
very beautifully written, your talent
in this write is beautiful. Thanks for
sharing this one. Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: A knock out of beta stage (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 04:55:46 PM AEST
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this is beautiful, very well written, i loved it, i really did




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