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[aid] => Mick
[title] => Holding On
[time] => 2002-11-28 09:30:00
[hometext] => I wrote this poem, because just the other day something happened between my best guy friend and my ex boyfriend and I realized some pretty surprising things. So I decided to write this, in tribute; to all the times me and my ex did share, and everything I've overcome since him.
[bodytext] => Reading through our memoirs
I can still envision the day we met Summer awakening in the midst of commotion The first moments, that I'll never forget Phone calls that followed Burning steady into the night Our relationship took off The connection felt right My nights were still restless My concience felt like cold wind -Dont hold me too tight, My heart musn't be pinned- Long nights felt longer As you slowly stole my heart No words can describe How this all came to start Days went to weeks Before your lips met mine, -Hold me forever, Until the end of time- You told me you loved me Nothing could go wrong You were my glimpse of heaven What kept me going strong ...If there is a god... I dont know what he was on, Because one day you were with me And the next...you were gone Tears felt like metal Tearing through my skin -Why did you let go, Of everything that could've been?- My shaking was rapid My eyes were a flood With hundreds of tears That tasted like blood I would have done anything Just to get you back -How could you hold my heart, Then jolt and attack?- These feelings continued Like the seasons of the year For times, you would be there But soon you would disapear You called for my heart Time after time After each you'd rebel And crush it to slime From the dank I would crawl To stand by your side -Why can't you hold on, To the love I provide?- Well, one day life shifted The world turned the right way, I forgot how I felt for you There's not much more to say But how can I tell you- "I've finally let go." -When I was still holding on And you didn't even know?- [comments] => 3 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 24 [informant] => flirtyrockstar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
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