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Array ( [sid] => 76078 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Lifes Pain [time] => 2004-12-16 18:43:53 [hometext] => was having a hard time with my self wrot this to try and work it out. enjoy, please leave comments. thanks [bodytext] => My Lifes Pain

why in my life do i feel on light
even though aginst all my demons I have won every fight
thay have no hold on my soul
why then do I feel empty and not whole
my soul is so burdend I want to cry
but when I do I find that my eyes are dry

my family loves me we do not fight
so I have no reason to hate my life... right?
my emotins are worn on my sleeve
so why do the ones I love always leave
my heart hurts from deep within
as I pray for my relife to begin
why oh why cant they see
that my soul just wants to be free

if they cant see then cures them all
for my life is taking its final fall
it does no good to grip and moan
for I can no longer return home
I will take myself to where it all begun
and tel the world that i am done.

"It's all over"
he sighs
"never mind." [comments] => 6 [counter] => 252 [topic] => 61 [informant] => wolfman [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
My Lifes Pain

Contributed by wolfman on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 06:43:53 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



My Lifes Pain

why in my life do i feel on light
even though aginst all my demons I have won every fight
thay have no hold on my soul
why then do I feel empty and not whole
my soul is so burdend I want to cry
but when I do I find that my eyes are dry

my family loves me we do not fight
so I have no reason to hate my life... right?
my emotins are worn on my sleeve
so why do the ones I love always leave
my heart hurts from deep within
as I pray for my relife to begin
why oh why cant they see
that my soul just wants to be free

if they cant see then cures them all
for my life is taking its final fall
it does no good to grip and moan
for I can no longer return home
I will take myself to where it all begun
and tel the world that i am done.

"It's all over"
he sighs
"never mind."




Copyright © wolfman ... [ 2004-12-16 18:43:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: My Lifes Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Apolla on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 06:57:31 PM AEST
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This poem is so beautiful and I can really relate, I really love how you expressed yourself.


Re: My Lifes Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 07:40:41 PM AEST
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man i could relate to this poem from start to end and all i can say is i feel no light in my life either but i still fight just like you


Re: My Lifes Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by shattered_heart on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 08:55:01 PM AEST
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Anything can make someone miserable if they let it. Just be strong and take a look at what you may have in life. Good write.

- Rachelle


Re: My Lifes Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 07:21:14 AM AEST
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a beautifully written emotional poem, you have great style and talent, flow was great also
pixie xx


Re: My Lifes Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 08:08:10 PM AEST
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You've won against all your demons... what about Frustration? Don't let Failure get you either. Turn your back on him for one second and he's got you in his clutches, thinking that you've lost. Then an angel appears, one called Hope. With her by your side, you can't ever lose.
Take care, Josh.
David


Re: My Lifes Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 06:44:31 PM AEST
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Powerful expression. You have a way of using the right words in the right way.

May your road rise up, and in the meantime, keep walking.

Andrew




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