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Array ( [sid] => 75782 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Longing for death [time] => 2004-12-14 17:57:16 [hometext] => Any thoughts or comments would be appreciated. [bodytext] => I lie here,
Longing for death,
For my body to be set free.
Only then I know,
Then, I shall be fully happy.
No longer vulnerable to the pains and the corruption of the world,
But free to roam in the kingdom of kings.
Am I worthy of such dreams?
Or am I too pained to ever be able to appreciate.
I long to be glorified,
In heaven with endless oppertunities.
I watch as the clock slowly ticks away,
Wondering how long it's going to take me to die,
To shed the pain and leave it behind.
Until then I lie waiting restlessly,
For death to come and take me. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Apolla [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Longing for death

Contributed by Apolla on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 05:57:16 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I lie here,
Longing for death,
For my body to be set free.
Only then I know,
Then, I shall be fully happy.
No longer vulnerable to the pains and the corruption of the world,
But free to roam in the kingdom of kings.
Am I worthy of such dreams?
Or am I too pained to ever be able to appreciate.
I long to be glorified,
In heaven with endless oppertunities.
I watch as the clock slowly ticks away,
Wondering how long it's going to take me to die,
To shed the pain and leave it behind.
Until then I lie waiting restlessly,
For death to come and take me.

Copyright © Apolla ... [ 2004-12-14 17:57:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Longing for death (User Rating: 1 )
by Artemis03 on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 06:12:44 PM AEST
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It's mine dream to. That one re-ocuring dream... But I know it won't be mine to embrace for a while. Deep and very touching.

Re: Longing for death (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 06:20:28 PM AEST
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death sounds so easy lets do it together great write tho

Re: Longing for death (User Rating: 1 )
by Thegirlwithsolittle on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 08:05:05 PM AEST
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i feel this so much! i taotally connected i tink thsi all say and it jsut seems to pass so slowly...checkout my poem called her savior plzz comment too, i think you would like it.
good job too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Re: Longing for death (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 06:55:49 AM AEST
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Hopefully it will be many of years before death knocks on your door.
You have so many more great writes to be wrote.
But time dose tick faster for some than others.
And this I know. Thanks for commenting on my poem.

Maybe you could read some of mine then my comment might make a little more sence.

Well Written.

~DENNIS~

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