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Array ( [sid] => 75635 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My love... I'm sorry [time] => 2004-12-13 18:06:45 [hometext] => I havent much to say about this one (its just me writing my feelings) please leave comments thanks [bodytext] => My love... I'm sorry

I have lost what I have never had
and the reason for this is all my bad
sher was so beautiful and always there
but without my expressions how could she care
I can no longer live with this strife
because she decided to take her life

she seemed so happy when I was her friend
what made her decide to bring it to an end
we had become and item she and I
how was I to know that my indecision would be her suicide
she was sweet her hearty was nicw
but now her skin is as cold as ice
my life is tiering without her around
another love like hers will not be found

her cries for help were soft and agile
so I could not see that she was so fragile
now her family will not help me to mend
because her need of me I could not comprehend
for her memori i will still go on
as we greave that she is gone

"Trisha..I love you."
he weeps
"I'm sorry."
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 22 [informant] => wolfman [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 27 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
My love... I'm sorry

Contributed by wolfman on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:06:45 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



My love... I'm sorry

I have lost what I have never had
and the reason for this is all my bad
sher was so beautiful and always there
but without my expressions how could she care
I can no longer live with this strife
because she decided to take her life

she seemed so happy when I was her friend
what made her decide to bring it to an end
we had become and item she and I
how was I to know that my indecision would be her suicide
she was sweet her hearty was nicw
but now her skin is as cold as ice
my life is tiering without her around
another love like hers will not be found

her cries for help were soft and agile
so I could not see that she was so fragile
now her family will not help me to mend
because her need of me I could not comprehend
for her memori i will still go on
as we greave that she is gone

"Trisha..I love you."
he weeps
"I'm sorry."




Copyright © wolfman ... [ 2004-12-13 18:06:45]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: My love... I'm sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:11:45 PM AEST
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what a horrible thing to have to deal with, so sorry for your loss-- beautiful and very deeply touching poem*


Re: My love... I'm sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by redtempest13 on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:53:48 PM AEST
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Wow. That was sad, but very good. I wish you the best. Just remember that God will listen, even if no one else will.


Re: My love... I'm sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by MMISS on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 07:37:57 PM AEST
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VERY SAD STORY. HOPE IT'S NOT TRUE! GOOD WORK.


Re: My love... I'm sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by witch_derna on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 05:14:39 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem. It's odd that I read this now after I just read your comment on my poem about me contemplating death. Something I do daily. Guess maybe I would be missed, by a few atleast. Anyways, I hope this isn't a true story. Great write Josh.
Blessings.
MaDonna


Re: My love... I'm sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 06:56:50 PM AEST
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I really like this one, though I don't know why. It's expressed really well in the sense that you display deep, dark feelings in a very orderly fashion.
Take care.
David


Re: My love... I'm sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 08:38:41 PM AEST
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Painful this most certainly is. Powerful story, and well spoken.

(and like the others, I hope it is fiction)

Slàn

Andrew




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