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Array ( [sid] => 75506 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If I Offered [time] => 2004-12-12 21:24:48 [hometext] => Sharing is Caring- Give to Recieve [bodytext] =>
If I offered you the world-
Would you accept it from me?
If I offered you riches beyond belief-
Would you share your wealth with me?
If I offered you my eyes-
Would you then see only me?
If I offered you my hand-
Would you extend it out to me?
If I offered you my life-
Would you accept it willingly?
If I offered you my shoulder-
Would you lean on me?
If I offered you my smile-
Would you laugh with me?
If I offered you my pain-
Would you remove it from me?
If I offered you my heart-
Would you then give yours to only me?
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 2 [informant] => hoist1atca [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

If I Offered

Contributed by hoist1atca on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 09:24:48 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

If I offered you the world-
Would you accept it from me?
If I offered you riches beyond belief-
Would you share your wealth with me?
If I offered you my eyes-
Would you then see only me?
If I offered you my hand-
Would you extend it out to me?
If I offered you my life-
Would you accept it willingly?
If I offered you my shoulder-
Would you lean on me?
If I offered you my smile-
Would you laugh with me?
If I offered you my pain-
Would you remove it from me?
If I offered you my heart-
Would you then give yours to only me?

Copyright © hoist1atca ... [ 2004-12-12 21:24:48]
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Re: If I Offered (User Rating: 1 )
by mintylass on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 09:35:45 PM AEST
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i lik this poem as it has style and i think its great.thanks for posting it here.

Re: If I Offered (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 10:12:30 PM AEST
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I can honestly say "yes" to those questions. I would all those things for the person I loved. Love is the one thing that, the more you give away the more you get in return.

This is a great poem and I too thank you for sharing it with us.

Rita

Re: If I Offered (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 11:45:44 PM AEST
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I wouldn't want the world, myself but this is great writing.
Big smiles,
emy

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