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Array ( [sid] => 75479 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => who am I? [time] => 2004-12-12 18:20:52 [hometext] => please read [bodytext] => In a corner of a dark room, there lies the one
The shadow of your mind,
the pain in your heart,
the hatred in your eyes
I come out at night hiding in the shadows
With a knife in my hands, seeking out victims for my pain
I collect soul of the dead and feed on them
Born out of hatred, pain and regret
I live a pained life never to see the light
People go in this room,
Hehehehehehe hope they like it here
because that’s the last time they’ll enter another room [comments] => 5 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 13 [informant] => the_fallen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

who am I?

Contributed by the_fallen on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 06:20:52 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

In a corner of a dark room, there lies the one
The shadow of your mind,
the pain in your heart,
the hatred in your eyes
I come out at night hiding in the shadows
With a knife in my hands, seeking out victims for my pain
I collect soul of the dead and feed on them
Born out of hatred, pain and regret
I live a pained life never to see the light
People go in this room,
Hehehehehehe hope they like it here
because that’s the last time they’ll enter another room

Copyright Â© the_fallen ... [ 2004-12-12 18:20:52]
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Re: who am I? (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 06:30:41 PM AEST
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The dark places of ones own mind can be the only escape for some. To enter a room to which there is no escape but to write. Nice write.

~DENNIS~

Re: who am I? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 06:44:20 PM AEST
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so many ways one could take this, but they all end in the same place, a well written poem on any level.

Re: who am I? (User Rating: 1 )
by Apolla on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 07:55:21 PM AEST
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Nicely written but the 'hehehehehe' could have been left out.

Re: who am I? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 08:30:11 PM AEST
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This is really good I liked it alot, Very powerful and writen well, This is a great Poem !

Re: who am I? (User Rating: 1 )
by hot-shot on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:21:57 AM AEST
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this is really good one..i like it
hav fun & hugz
hot-shot

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