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I will matter
my world around me
won't always shatter

I will be truly loved
not tossed aside

Each day I awake
the pain is there
inside ..so deep
locked up in my soul
where i keep it
growing it feeds on the best of me
enslaving me from freedom and peace

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fear inside

Contributed by PhantomVampyress on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 02:34:16 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Maybe in another time and place
I will matter
my world around me
won't always shatter

I will be truly loved
not tossed aside

Each day I awake
the pain is there
inside ..so deep
locked up in my soul
where i keep it
growing it feeds on the best of me
enslaving me from freedom and peace

JENNI

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Re: fear inside (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 02:54:53 PM AEST
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Yeah I can relate to this especially the last
line awesome poem kind of short, but
forcefully written.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: fear inside (User Rating: 1 )
by romayne on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 03:03:23 PM AEST
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Excellent, strong poem. Romayne

Re: fear inside (User Rating: 1 )
by eyesxcriedxout1989 on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 04:06:52 PM AEST
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This was an amazingly powerful, emotional write...kinda felt like it punched me in the gut...I know this all too well...Excellent write

Mason

Re: fear inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 06:46:03 PM AEST
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Wow,for only taking a few minutes that rocked! It was very touching and sad. I wonder the same thing. I wonder if we will get a second chance...

Re: fear inside (User Rating: 1 )
by DesperateSoul on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 12:33:36 AM AEST
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Very Good!! I like the way the rhyme picked up pace at ther end!! Keep writing and keep posting always Jenni!!! D.$.

Re: fear inside (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 05:21:45 AM AEST
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great poem, deep and expressed well,

pixie xx

Re: fear inside (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 10:03:44 AM AEST
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powerful write
Michelle

Re: fear inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Black13 on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 01:24:28 PM AEST
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This one was excellent.
It was full and complete.
Darkly beautiful though.

Re: fear inside (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 11:22:56 PM AEST
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Simple, short and sweet, just how I like them from you. I know you can find someone to love you, but I am here and I love you!!! Great write, very powerful.

Re: fear inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 10:56:44 PM AEST
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this was amazing. i love it. the rhythmn was incredible and i loved how the concept was portrayed.

Re: fear inside (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Wednesday, 11th April 2007 @ 03:50:33 AM AEST
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I like this tittle very captivating yeh pain and so much of anything elase that can enslave us, ususaly ends up in the heart zone. causing stress and just a plain intolerable situation. as i'm sure your well aware of. as always old or new, your poetry tells it like is. upfront and in your face. great 2 see u back.
keep up the good writting. i missed it.

Ben

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