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[sid] => 75219
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => MY STORM
[time] => 2004-12-10 16:59:38
[hometext] => I don't know if I really like my writing on this poem but PLEASE let me know what you think!!!!
[bodytext] => I just wish that you could see, the pain that you put in my eyes. The hurt that you give me, you make it stormy from the sunny sky's. You are my fears, you are my tears. This I just wish you could see, you make me not want to be. I try so hard to make this be complete, but there’s a dark cloud, that I can’t defeat. The thunder and yelling starts and its so loud I really believe that one day, we’ll break through the rain. I don't know if right now that's to say, cause all I feel is numbness to the pain. As the rain gets slow, and the thunder goes. The lightning lights the way for us to know, and the true you shows. Sometimes I just want, my life to end, but that's almost to blunt. All I wish for with you is time to spend. The storm is gone now, and finally, you will allow, me to tell you the truth. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 48 [informant] => karmen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
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