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Array ( [sid] => 75115 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => its dry [time] => 2004-12-09 22:02:44 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Im might not make much sense to you.
I dont want to be the hope that you sink your hooks into.
Because im the The first Person That you cant See through
You can compliment yourself Because I知 not confused

Tie you up stay still, so I can get inside you head
And I know you made it hard
But you have to lay inside your bed
Chew you up and spit you out
And we still dont even know each other
Next time I値l make them wait 2 weeks
Before they get a chance to smother
To you I知 just a trophy
Resembling a stripper from quebec
So now I just date ugly guys
So that they池e egos are in check









[comments] => 3 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 56 [informant] => briefcircle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => sarcasticpoetry )
its dry

Contributed by briefcircle on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 10:02:44 PM in AEST
Topic: sarcasticpoetry



Im might not make much sense to you.
I dont want to be the hope that you sink your hooks into.
Because im the The first Person That you cant See through
You can compliment yourself Because I知 not confused

Tie you up stay still, so I can get inside you head
And I know you made it hard
But you have to lay inside your bed
Chew you up and spit you out
And we still dont even know each other
Next time I値l make them wait 2 weeks
Before they get a chance to smother
To you I知 just a trophy
Resembling a stripper from quebec
So now I just date ugly guys
So that they池e egos are in check













Copyright ﾂｩ briefcircle ... [ 2004-12-09 22:02:44]
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Re: its dry (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 10:07:04 PM AEST
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hello again =] excellent write. i loved that ending, it was a slap in the face to guys who dont think they are ugly. pride, conceit, and egos are the biggest turnoffs or turnoffs for some people though.


Re: its dry (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 10:22:57 PM AEST
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yea what she said im ugly and proud and egos suck good write


Re: its dry (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 06:13:11 PM AEST
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So now I just date ugly guys
So that they’re egos are in check

Not a bad idea, actually. Steer clear of the modern me-culture whenever possible. Also make certain you do not contribute to it by your own attitude. All of us have a hard time with pride and selfishness.

Sl瀟

Andrew




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