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Array ( [sid] => 74778 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Conciously Shattered Self [time] => 2004-12-07 15:54:01 [hometext] => People at school are complete butt plugs... [bodytext] => I've felt tired for a while
Insomnia, pulling me further than you ever could
Feeling tired is nothing, compared
To being hated

Hate me
But I'll laugh
When you're bleeding
Bastard
I hate you

Your endless mirth
At my helpless efforts
To manually mend a shattered self-concience
You left your mark on my eyes
The mark of hatred

Hate me
But I'll laugh
When you're bleeding
Bastard
I hate you

Whats to hate
Freedom?
Self-Expression?
Because I refuse to fit in
On everyone elses standards
So go ahead, hate me
But I won't hate you
There is too much compassion
In this shattered, bloody heart

So hate me
But cry while you're bleeding
Because I'll help

But pay me no heed
When I'm bleeding
And I'll cry
And you'll hate me

Hate me... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 236 [topic] => 34 [informant] => eyesxcriedxout1989 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

A Conciously Shattered Self

Contributed by eyesxcriedxout1989 on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 03:54:01 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

I've felt tired for a while
Insomnia, pulling me further than you ever could
Feeling tired is nothing, compared
To being hated

Hate me
But I'll laugh
When you're bleeding
Bastard
I hate you

Your endless mirth
At my helpless efforts
To manually mend a shattered self-concience
You left your mark on my eyes
The mark of hatred

Hate me
But I'll laugh
When you're bleeding
Bastard
I hate you

Whats to hate
Freedom?
Self-Expression?
Because I refuse to fit in
On everyone elses standards
So go ahead, hate me
But I won't hate you
There is too much compassion
In this shattered, bloody heart

So hate me
But cry while you're bleeding
Because I'll help

But pay me no heed
When I'm bleeding
And I'll cry
And you'll hate me

Hate me...

Copyright © eyesxcriedxout1989 ... [ 2004-12-07 15:54:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A Conciously Shattered Self (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 09:32:47 PM AEST
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powerful write.

Re: A Conciously Shattered Self (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 06:44:42 PM AEST
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Great stuff, Shemp...
Mason!

keep on writing,
I'll keep reading.

--The Moth

Re: A Conciously Shattered Self (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 12:48:37 AM AEST
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I do hate you.... for writing such a great poem that i didn't write. i really don't hate you mason, i love you cuz. this was an excellent poem, by one of my favorite poets!!!!

Re: A Conciously Shattered Self (User Rating: 1 )
by EVERxSOxSWEET on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 05:09:56 PM AEST
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holy crap mas, this was awesum. I can relate to it a lot..your awesum..everything you write just blows me away..that was powerful...

-kaylee !

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