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Array ( [sid] => 74618 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Please forgive me [time] => 2004-12-06 11:37:25 [hometext] => [bodytext] => please forgive me,
if your always on my mind,
as your always in my conversation,
your name the word my tongue will find,
your making my heart beat,
keeping me on my toes,
making my soul tick,
then following you wherever yours goes,
you make me think of brighter times,
making me think of how close i need to be to you,
visualising moments,
things that we need to do,

please forgive me,
if i day dream of loving you,
dream of telling you my feelings,
how you make me feel brand new,
plucking the petals from a rose,
thinking of a love thats pure and true,
im dreaming of those seconds,
when time slowed down for us two,

please forgive me,
if i dont talk to you alone,
i am shy and flustered,
im different on my own,
i dont know what to say,
i dont know what i need to do,
i dont know how to look deep in your eyes,
without dreaming of loving you,

please forgive me,
if im not helping myself get to you,
if im making myself to be a fool,
maybe you are too,
maybe there is something,
a flame in pitch black,
the knife is being eased,
from inside my back,
now im turning,
all my love your way,
and now im dreaming,
of my judgement day,
will you be there to watch me go,
will i say i love you when im on my knees?
will you be by my side asking
'god help her please'?
or will you be gone,
some place, some how,
please dont reject my ponderings,
just forgive me if i hold a gun to my brow,
il tell you i need you,
i need you more than anything now,
will you embrace me?
forgive me for causing this pain in you thats so much bigger,
will you forgive me,
even if i pull the trigger?




there is a moral to this poem:
'tell someone you love them before it's too late...'
you may never get the chance...
jazz
jazz13697@hotmail




[comments] => 4 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 2 [informant] => in2thetwilightzone2 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Please forgive me

Contributed by in2thetwilightzone2 on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 11:37:25 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



please forgive me,
if your always on my mind,
as your always in my conversation,
your name the word my tongue will find,
your making my heart beat,
keeping me on my toes,
making my soul tick,
then following you wherever yours goes,
you make me think of brighter times,
making me think of how close i need to be to you,
visualising moments,
things that we need to do,

please forgive me,
if i day dream of loving you,
dream of telling you my feelings,
how you make me feel brand new,
plucking the petals from a rose,
thinking of a love thats pure and true,
im dreaming of those seconds,
when time slowed down for us two,

please forgive me,
if i dont talk to you alone,
i am shy and flustered,
im different on my own,
i dont know what to say,
i dont know what i need to do,
i dont know how to look deep in your eyes,
without dreaming of loving you,

please forgive me,
if im not helping myself get to you,
if im making myself to be a fool,
maybe you are too,
maybe there is something,
a flame in pitch black,
the knife is being eased,
from inside my back,
now im turning,
all my love your way,
and now im dreaming,
of my judgement day,
will you be there to watch me go,
will i say i love you when im on my knees?
will you be by my side asking
'god help her please'?
or will you be gone,
some place, some how,
please dont reject my ponderings,
just forgive me if i hold a gun to my brow,
il tell you i need you,
i need you more than anything now,
will you embrace me?
forgive me for causing this pain in you thats so much bigger,
will you forgive me,
even if i pull the trigger?




there is a moral to this poem:
'tell someone you love them before it's too late...'
you may never get the chance...
jazz
jazz13697@hotmail








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Re: Please forgive me (User Rating: 1 )
by TheRaven on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 11:41:55 AM AEST
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Very emotional write. Great job grasping the reader with true feelings. I know what this feels like, but it worked out for me, so hang in there.
the raven


Re: Please forgive me (User Rating: 1 )
by Flicker on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 12:15:47 PM AEST
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wow that was a really deep poem.this poem got my attention.i wanted to keep on reading.great job writing this poem.


Re: Please forgive me (User Rating: 1 )
by dtborchert on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 06:14:11 AM AEST
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Excellent Write. More people should heed your advice with this poem. Keep up the good work.

Tena


Re: Please forgive me (User Rating: 1 )
by dtborchert on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 06:14:56 AM AEST
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Excellent Write. More people should heed your advice with this poem. Keep up the good work.

Tena




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