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that gothics have no heart
but when were all together
no one can tell us a part

dressed in either black or red
with long sliver chains
it takes away from the world
from all the endless pain

no one understands
the thoughts that go through are mind
but without these thoughts
our hearts would be hard to find

headphones blaring in our ears
drowning out all the unwanted sounds
looking at magizines filled with
rock bands, skulls and clowns

you hate us cause were different
we hate you cause your all the same
we know we'll survive in the end
because of our cunning gothic ways [comments] => 7 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 43 [informant] => happybunnyfan [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Gothic Mind

Contributed by happybunnyfan on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 11:47:40 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

sometimes people think
that gothics have no heart
but when were all together
no one can tell us a part

dressed in either black or red
with long sliver chains
it takes away from the world
from all the endless pain

no one understands
the thoughts that go through are mind
but without these thoughts
our hearts would be hard to find

headphones blaring in our ears
drowning out all the unwanted sounds
looking at magizines filled with
rock bands, skulls and clowns

you hate us cause were different
we hate you cause your all the same
we know we'll survive in the end
because of our cunning gothic ways

Copyright © happybunnyfan ... [ 2004-12-05 23:47:40]
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Re: Gothic Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 11:54:13 PM AEST
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Don't know much about Gothic but I do know u r a great writer.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
Hang tuff.

Re: Gothic Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 12:05:05 AM AEST
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Awesome, you did gothics all around the world justice with this poem.

Re: Gothic Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 12:36:46 AM AEST
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i really can relate to this poem and

headphones blaring in our ears
drowning out all the unwanted sounds
looking at magizines filled with
rock bands, skulls and clowns

i love that part

i agree with goth chick

great write

Re: Gothic Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 01:46:09 AM AEST
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i especially love the lines
you hate us cause were different
we hate you cause your all the same
well done
xo

Re: Gothic Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:33:53 AM AEST
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Nice job.

Re: Gothic Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 01:09:05 AM AEST
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this is great! I really REALLY like the last line *evil smile*

Re: Gothic Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 03:55:22 AM AEST
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another grrrrrrrrrrrrrreat one but yea the ba5tard5 bet me n leave me nuttin to say im not gothic or anythin im diff from everyone and even goths goth chics are hot lol

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