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Array ( [sid] => 74166 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mommy [time] => 2004-12-02 18:36:05 [hometext] => idk if you'd usually consider this self struggling but i do cuz telling my mom these words gets harder and harder for me each day, plz comment and tell me what u think, i know its not the greatest [bodytext] => Mommy please don’t leave me
Id hate for you to go

Mommy please don’t cry for me
I’ve just wanted you to know

That through all my short lived years
Through all the happiness and tears
Through all the fights
And all the screams
Through all the terrors
And the dreams

That you have not once let me down
Whenever I fell you helped me up off the ground

You always encouraged me to spread my wings and fly
Always helped me touch the sky

I love you Mom
Please, never tell me goodbye [comments] => 1 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 61 [informant] => kisser89 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Mommy

Contributed by kisser89 on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 06:36:05 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Mommy please don’t leave me
Id hate for you to go

Mommy please don’t cry for me
I’ve just wanted you to know

That through all my short lived years
Through all the happiness and tears
Through all the fights
And all the screams
Through all the terrors
And the dreams

That you have not once let me down
Whenever I fell you helped me up off the ground

You always encouraged me to spread my wings and fly
Always helped me touch the sky

I love you Mom
Please, never tell me goodbye

Copyright Â© kisser89 ... [ 2004-12-02 18:36:05]
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Re: Mommy (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 07:08:45 PM AEST
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brilliant and amazing write. full of power and emotion. written well. hopefully your mom will never leave you, but if she does you have the strength to go on without her and with what shes taught you.

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