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[title] => An Autumn Meeting
[time] => 2004-12-02 16:58:48
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[bodytext] => Darling departed, how I miss thee,
I see you in the fleeting breeze.
You run along the khaki sidewalk,
And dance between a twirl of leaves.
Your skirt is a symphony of orange and yellow,
It gleams with the radiance of the sun.
Your hair makes love to the silver wind,
Flowing about your smiling face.
The sapphire sky looks down with envy,
It whispers a warning at your nape.
You run along the khaki sidewalk,
And leave me in your silent wake.
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An Autumn Meeting
Contributed by
Clarity_Rising
on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 04:58:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Darling departed, how I miss thee,
I see you in the fleeting breeze.
You run along the khaki sidewalk,
And dance between a twirl of leaves.
Your skirt is a symphony of orange and yellow,
It gleams with the radiance of the sun.
Your hair makes love to the silver wind,
Flowing about your smiling face.
The sapphire sky looks down with envy,
It whispers a warning at your nape.
You run along the khaki sidewalk,
And leave me in your silent wake.
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Clarity_Rising
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Re: An Autumn Meeting
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by CaddishCut on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 05:09:59 PM AEST
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| Plants a beautiful image in my mind. Great work! |
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Re: An Autumn Meeting
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 06:21:34 PM AEST
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| good write and nice imagery. |
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Re: An Autumn Meeting
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by aringb on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 11:07:57 AM AEST
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| Autumn a beautiful time of the year. Great imagery. Well written. |
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Re: An Autumn Meeting
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 11:34:38 PM AEST
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I agree..the imagery is very good.
I look forward to reading more of your work. |
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Re: An Autumn Meeting
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:23:42 AM AEST
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and so I get my first glimpse at your work, and it will not be the last, I am impressed.
Great screen name too. |
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Re: An Autumn Meeting
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 09:59:15 PM AEST
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Beautiful.
Spazzo |
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Re: An Autumn Meeting
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by CuriousitysCat on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 10:26:19 AM AEST
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Wow, this is I think maybe my favorite nature poem. Everything flowed so well and the words just painted vivid images in my mind. Great metaphorical use for Autumn. I really enjoyed this, and Im glad you put it on here.
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~JaZz |
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Re: An Autumn Meeting
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by The_Cowardly_Lion on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 08:43:18 PM AEST
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| beautifully painted write, with an ending that left me with a solemn sense of awe. powerful. i really liked it |
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Re: An Autumn Meeting
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by TheSpiritx on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 11:08:18 PM AEST
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I thought to read some for all you've read of mine!
And this was a good place to start, for sure. I'm open to any kind of poetry on almost any subject since I like execution the most. Your execution was great here with the colors, which embody autumn perfectly. It's the type of ideal autumn setting that I think of with the beautiful and vibrant browns, reds, and yellows that strike against the sky regardless of the time of day.
I like how her hair makes love to the silver wind, too. I can picture this just as easily and I am enjoying it all the way around. :)
Great work.
TS |
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Re: An Autumn Meeting
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by wizard on
Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 10:41:28 PM AEST
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another great write... beautiful imagery and metaphors... i love the whole feeling of it!
wiz |
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Re: An Autumn Meeting
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 11:14:48 AM AEST
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I think some people are just born poetically inclined....you being one of them ;o).
Absolutely beautiful my friend
Very well written once again
Roses
Larry |
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