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Array ( [sid] => 74139 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Walk In The Woods [time] => 2004-12-02 15:57:29 [hometext] => This is a small woods in a neighborhood park. One day a year or so ago I noticed three boys pushing bycles through the woods.The pathes were all overgrown so I spent that summer clearing the trails.I worked my butt off [bodytext] => Trees are bare
Branches reaching as if to grab
Here it is ths second of december
Skelton fingers ready to nab
A small finch still hanging around
A big o'l bluejay on the ground
Squriles scurry for a tree
Mans best friend along side of me
Walking trails that curve and twist
Freckles leash tugging at my wrist
I enjoy the freshness of the air
Morning dew and weather fair
Down a hill through some reeds
Leaving muddy tracks for others to see
Freckles sniffing at the ground
I listening for natures sound
I take this treck most everyday
It gives me pause to listen and pray
Be silent be still
Time to listen to His will
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A Walk In The Woods

Contributed by Sinned on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 03:57:29 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

Trees are bare
Branches reaching as if to grab
Here it is ths second of december
Skelton fingers ready to nab
A small finch still hanging around
A big o'l bluejay on the ground
Squriles scurry for a tree
Mans best friend along side of me
Walking trails that curve and twist
Freckles leash tugging at my wrist
I enjoy the freshness of the air
Morning dew and weather fair
Down a hill through some reeds
Leaving muddy tracks for others to see
Freckles sniffing at the ground
I listening for natures sound
I take this treck most everyday
It gives me pause to listen and pray
Be silent be still
Time to listen to His will

Copyright © Sinned ... [ 2004-12-02 15:57:29]
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Re: A Walk In The Woods (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 06:45:18 PM AEST
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you are a generous person, i dont know many people who would spend a summer clearing trails. =]

excellent write. as it so happens i was on an overgrown trail today....or we were making a new trail....

Re: A Walk In The Woods (User Rating: 1 )
by aringb on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 11:12:07 AM AEST
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Great poem. Like the line "skeleton fingers ready to nab". A few spelling errors, but otherwise great write.

Re: A Walk In The Woods (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 11:54:25 AM AEST
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Now, I like this entirely and can't disagree with a thing except some of your spelling. You took me to that place and, yes, that would be my quiet time with the Lord as well.
Stitch

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