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Array ( [sid] => 74045 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => dead [time] => 2004-12-02 00:18:19 [hometext] => PLEASE COMMENT!!! [bodytext] => I feel dead to the world,
dead to myself.
I am just another face in the crowd.
Another person,
waiting to die.
Just another loser,
put down by everyone around.
I’m just another child,
who’s father left her side.
I fly but fall,
fight but fail.
I’m worthless,
I’m no one.
I scream, but no one hears.
I cry, but no one sees.
I want to get out of this place.
I’m tired of all the pain,
all the yelling,
all the tears. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 48 [informant] => karmen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

dead

Contributed by karmen on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 12:18:19 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I feel dead to the world,
dead to myself.
I am just another face in the crowd.
Another person,
waiting to die.
Just another loser,
put down by everyone around.
I’m just another child,
who’s father left her side.
I fly but fall,
fight but fail.
I’m worthless,
I’m no one.
I scream, but no one hears.
I cry, but no one sees.
I want to get out of this place.
I’m tired of all the pain,
all the yelling,
all the tears.

Copyright © karmen ... [ 2004-12-02 00:18:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: dead (User Rating: 1 )
by Dragontear27 on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 12:33:15 AM AEST
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I'm glad i'm not the only one that feels that way. the poem i just wrote on here "The Butterfly Effect" is kinda like this one also another one I wrote awile back is like this one as well. I could and should try to make you feel better but I myself know what it feels like...to well.... feel that way. Very good emotional expression atleast I think it is because I know exaclty how you feel, all to well. Or maybe you don't feel this way at all maybe it's just a poem you thought of, but in any case wonderful write. ~~lates~~

Re: dead (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 12:47:45 AM AEST
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Brilliantly written. I think we've all been there at some point, and alot of us still are. I hope you feel better some time soon.

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