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Array ( [sid] => 73782 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Transformation (greg) [time] => 2004-11-30 15:37:49 [hometext] => this is my poem about how much i wish i could change someone into a better them. they need to stop messing with my head and listen to what i say, because i know he has it in him. this poem is dedicated to greg [bodytext] => il scratch you deep under your skin,
il slice a hole and crawl right in,
il infect your mind with woeful sin,

il bleed your dreams till you sleep with open eyes,
il ignite the fire as you burn in demise,
now well see who regrets the lies

maybe now the little boy will play no more,
and give his heart to the one who's he nearly tore,
burst with emotion, love galour,

to wrap me warm and keep me sane,
so i can feel his heart as he swears to never play again,
il feel it burn and beat right through the vein,
il hide the scars he put on my brain

and when i feel his lips curess my skin,
il feel a tingle from deep within,
that'll make me smile and contently grin,

as i have shown a demon his enlightment,
i have turned my pain into sheer excitement,
as now when i look in his eyes for inspiration,
il see the truth knowing theres no imitation,
and cry in relief of this great transformation...

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 62 [informant] => In2thetwilightzone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => spiritual )
Transformation (greg)

Contributed by In2thetwilightzone on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 03:37:49 PM in AEST
Topic: spiritual



il scratch you deep under your skin,
il slice a hole and crawl right in,
il infect your mind with woeful sin,

il bleed your dreams till you sleep with open eyes,
il ignite the fire as you burn in demise,
now well see who regrets the lies

maybe now the little boy will play no more,
and give his heart to the one who's he nearly tore,
burst with emotion, love galour,

to wrap me warm and keep me sane,
so i can feel his heart as he swears to never play again,
il feel it burn and beat right through the vein,
il hide the scars he put on my brain

and when i feel his lips curess my skin,
il feel a tingle from deep within,
that'll make me smile and contently grin,

as i have shown a demon his enlightment,
i have turned my pain into sheer excitement,
as now when i look in his eyes for inspiration,
il see the truth knowing theres no imitation,
and cry in relief of this great transformation...





Copyright © In2thetwilightzone ... [ 2004-11-30 15:37:49]
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Re: Transformation (greg) (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 10:44:31 PM AEST
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well i dont agree with changing someone just to fit someone elses preference. afterall, are the changes you want actually right for him? i think people trying to change others to what they think is disrespectful. its like saying you arent good enough till you are this way. thats like religious people converting others because they think they are right. they have no respect for the person themselves.


Re: Transformation (greg) (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 11:24:21 PM AEST
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It is an interesting poem. Dark, but interesting.




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