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Array ( [sid] => 73680 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => whatever [time] => 2004-11-29 21:40:03 [hometext] => [bodytext] => gun is loaded
and the knife is sharpened
your ready to leave your life
your deciding on how to do it
and now no one is to stop you
your gonna do this
its gonna be the end now
your gonna show everyone
thats ever doubted you
that they should have given you a chance
see your only remembered when your dead
then everyone wants you back
cuz they realize that life just isnt the same
weather your popular
or never talked to
with out you...wait what am i saying
thats bull*****
no one would care so blow your head off
slit your wrists
hey this is only my take on it
weather you like it or not
i dont care [comments] => 3 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 43 [informant] => amatt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

whatever

Contributed by amatt on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:40:03 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

gun is loaded
and the knife is sharpened
your ready to leave your life
your deciding on how to do it
and now no one is to stop you
your gonna do this
its gonna be the end now
your gonna show everyone
thats ever doubted you
that they should have given you a chance
see your only remembered when your dead
then everyone wants you back
cuz they realize that life just isnt the same
weather your popular
or never talked to
with out you...wait what am i saying
thats bull*****
no one would care so blow your head off
slit your wrists
hey this is only my take on it
weather you like it or not
i dont care

Copyright © amatt ... [ 2004-11-29 21:40:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: whatever (User Rating: 1 )
by Live2Die on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:44:36 PM AEST
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That is a nice write...and I must once again disagree. There is someone out there who cares. Always. Maybe you just can't see them yet.

Re: whatever (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:51:48 PM AEST
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i who once wrote things like this dont agree with it anymore...powerful write.

Re: whatever (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 11:53:58 PM AEST
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awesome

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