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They’re somewhere I don’t want them to be,
They’re inside my head whispering & wailing,
I am in fear that my sanity’s failing.

I can’t shut them out the climb back in,
They are so deeply imbedded under my skin,
Crawling around using me for their amusement,
Are they demons that the devil has sent?

They keep hurting me what have I done?
To make demons laugh at me & make fun,
I was never evil, maybe a little bit bad,
I caused worry for my mum & dad.

Is that why they haunt me so?
Please tell me then I will know,
I deserve to know why I am being tormented,
By things that are cruel & damn right demented.

My head feels like its being torn in two,
Please my demons tell me what I have to do,
To make you stop inflicting pain inside,
Every day a little bit more of me has died.

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Make Them Stop

Contributed by pixie on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 02:26:25 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Make them stop talking to me,
They’re somewhere I don’t want them to be,
They’re inside my head whispering & wailing,
I am in fear that my sanity’s failing.

I can’t shut them out the climb back in,
They are so deeply imbedded under my skin,
Crawling around using me for their amusement,
Are they demons that the devil has sent?

They keep hurting me what have I done?
To make demons laugh at me & make fun,
I was never evil, maybe a little bit bad,
I caused worry for my mum & dad.

Is that why they haunt me so?
Please tell me then I will know,
I deserve to know why I am being tormented,
By things that are cruel & damn right demented.

My head feels like its being torn in two,
Please my demons tell me what I have to do,
To make you stop inflicting pain inside,
Every day a little bit more of me has died.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-11-29 14:26:25]
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Re: Make Them Stop (User Rating: 1 )
by Dominick-Destruction on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 02:30:47 PM AEST
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Awsome piece pixie sweetie *mwah*...
Remember..When you are faced with your demons Feed them & clothe them...
xDDx

Re: Make Them Stop (User Rating: 1 )
by ImHearingVoices on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 02:37:09 PM AEST
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another ace write wow, but u so sad inside :( glad u let it all out in this way and share your talent and pain with us all :)
thanx
XxX Lunicor

Re: Make Them Stop (User Rating: 1 )
by Catalina on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 02:47:58 PM AEST
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Awsome write! You never stop amazing me with your perceptions & words.
~Catalina~

Re: Make Them Stop (User Rating: 1 )
by nascarfive on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 03:18:10 PM AEST
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at least it's not your cornflakes talking to you..hehe

Re: Make Them Stop (User Rating: 1 )
by eyesxcriedxout1989 on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 03:30:44 PM AEST
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Very good write here...thanks for sharing

Mason

Re: Make Them Stop (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 03:44:44 PM AEST
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they just try and think of me and they will go away coz you know you will always have a friend in me who will never stray

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