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FiguringThatItWasPastDue

Contributed by deadreckoning1983 on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 03:19:40 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

LatelyIfeellikeIhavebeengutted
Carvedupandscatteredlikedebris
Runtogetherwithsomanythings
Iamnotevenaliveanymore
Withoutpunctuationorreason
Peoplewillfindthiseclecticorqueer
Ifinditfuntionaltothepointofmadness
Weallmustbehaveirrationallyattimes
Withoutapurposeortask
Otherwisesanitywouldtakeoverandthenwherewouldwebe
Screamingfortheinstitutionofchaos
Thatswhere
IwillsleepeasytonightknowingIruinedagoodpeom
Youbraggartsandsocalledpoets
Ihopeyoucanchokethisonedown
Tryingtofinditsmeaningorplacingmeinacategory
Iwillsleepwellknowingthattheycantandneverwill

Copyright © deadreckoning1983 ... [ 2004-11-29 03:19:40]
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Re: FiguringThatItWasPastDue (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampyre_BloodWraith on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 05:39:29 AM AEST
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A poem with difference, but written by insanity, you have to know before you can walk that road, still I saw the words, felt the flow, dont care wether what you saw in it, I saw an awesome write.

Re: FiguringThatItWasPastDue (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 08:49:31 AM AEST
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Is 'funtional' misspelled intentionally?

I'd like to know what you would have wrote instead of this 'bad' poem . . ?

Perhaps time will tell.

Keep writing, DR.

Re: FiguringThatItWasPastDue (User Rating: 1 )
by cuddlytiger17 on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 04:36:03 PM AEST
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lol Dane you crack me up. You'll never fit any "category" though, so you shall always rest assured. :)

Re: FiguringThatItWasPastDue (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 04:22:08 PM AEST
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It's good to do this
and defy the establishment's
and fans'
expectations.

There's different ways to do it.
In this case it's very straightforward.
And it made me think,
so then it made me laugh,
because at the end you're
saying the most stuffy
readers probably don't like it
and they can choke on it....
They just read the damn thing.
And there's nothing they can do about it.

--Mothy

Re: FiguringThatItWasPastDue (User Rating: 1 )
by eyesxcriedxout1989 on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 08:11:40 PM AEST
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Effing AMAZING, Dane...I loved this...how it was written, the form, the message....greatness

Mason

Re: FiguringThatItWasPastDue (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 02:32:18 AM AEST
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wow, this is awesome, well done!

Re: FiguringThatItWasPastDue (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 3rd December 2014 @ 10:30:56 AM AEST
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Well this is different. It might've come with a headache warning! Lol.
Not sure my poor eyes could take much more, but you held the reader's attention... :)
Functional to the point of madness indeed!

Irrational can be refreshing, ya crazy nut. There! You've been categorized. Ha!

~Scorp

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