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Array ( [sid] => 73079 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Three in Mind [time] => 2004-11-25 00:48:44 [hometext] => [bodytext] => These new born beliefs,
have a twin,
his eyes still closed,
they named him ignorance

A healthy cry,
a sceptic's eye,
ignorance awakens,
perception he finds

United in mind,
they grow
facts and fiction,
already known

Adults, they part
meet know and then,
sit in front of the world,
make amends.

With perception forever busy
and belief getting old
ignorance is lonely,
he's lost his bold

A time has passed,
belief found youth,
perception still asks,
ignorance moved

The world always on,
they usually meet,
ignorance missing
for a while it seems

Perception and belief notice,
they don't seem to mind,
sure he'll show up,
when perception dies
and belief's in a bind.
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Three in Mind

Contributed by matt73 on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 12:48:44 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

These new born beliefs,
have a twin,
his eyes still closed,
they named him ignorance

A healthy cry,
a sceptic's eye,
ignorance awakens,
perception he finds

United in mind,
they grow
facts and fiction,
already known

Adults, they part
meet know and then,
sit in front of the world,
make amends.

With perception forever busy
and belief getting old
ignorance is lonely,
he's lost his bold

A time has passed,
belief found youth,
perception still asks,
ignorance moved

The world always on,
they usually meet,
ignorance missing
for a while it seems

Perception and belief notice,
they don't seem to mind,
sure he'll show up,
when perception dies
and belief's in a bind.

Copyright © matt73 ... [ 2004-11-25 00:48:44]
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Re: Three in Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 01:07:28 PM AEST
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Interesting thoughts. I'm surprised no one has commented here. This was a thought-provoking write. Thanks for writing! Blessings.

Re: Three in Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 01:21:59 PM AEST
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I love it when feelings are given character. They're characters in and of themselves, and you pulled it off quite nicely in this poem. I'm so ignorant sometimes, I tend to just shoot my mouth and completely ignore the actual poem i just read. Like this one time i was at home playing with my brother and he was like shut up and im like no u shut up and then im like oh ya? well u better b ....

lol joking, i really liked this poem. very relatable, and you did it so uniquely. This kind of work is surprisingly rare nowadays, nice to see somebody can pull it off so effectively. Great write.

Re: Three in Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by xMizeriex on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 06:34:11 AM AEST
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Powerful poetry.

Bx

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