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Array ( [sid] => 73008 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Back when this began [time] => 2004-11-24 16:57:35 [hometext] => **hurting right now** a guy i really like doesnt feel the same after he pretty much said he did............................. [bodytext] =>

I have to make that decision of walking away,
This is so hard for me to do and say.
I let you in, but now I have to push you out.
I should have known from the start, there was too much doubt.

You made it seem like you were into me,
Of course you were, yet it weren’t meant to be.
We had some fun, but now its time for the end.
We can no longer pretend,
After all you never really liked me, I was just a little distraction.
All you managed to do is make my darkness deepen.

There’s no hope for us friendship may prove hard,
Maybe we should take a trip to a graveyard,
After all that’s where all the dead hang out.
My heart feels completely burnt out.
Was it part of you’re plan?
Back when all this began.

SJ

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Back when this began

Contributed by little_genna on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 04:57:35 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I have to make that decision of walking away,
This is so hard for me to do and say.
I let you in, but now I have to push you out.
I should have known from the start, there was too much doubt.

You made it seem like you were into me,
Of course you were, yet it weren’t meant to be.
We had some fun, but now its time for the end.
We can no longer pretend,
After all you never really liked me, I was just a little distraction.
All you managed to do is make my darkness deepen.

There’s no hope for us friendship may prove hard,
Maybe we should take a trip to a graveyard,
After all that’s where all the dead hang out.
My heart feels completely burnt out.
Was it part of you’re plan?
Back when all this began.

SJ

Copyright © little_genna ... [ 2004-11-24 16:57:35]
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Re: Back when this began (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 05:01:51 PM AEST
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this is really a brilliant and beautiful and sad write i know how it feels to be misled and to be made to feel something for someone who can just never return the jestures this is like a poem i wrote today that i think you might like

well the title is my heart is in a gilded cage by Doriens_Picture you can always look me up if you would like the chat or what ever

Re: Back when this began (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 05:27:37 PM AEST
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i've had that happen to me ...recently.... but hang in there! theres always someone else!! :) then you can forget about that jerk!
*leeya*

Re: Back when this began (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 07:39:41 AM AEST
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:( *hugs you tons* awwww hun this is so sad , emotionally and deeply written,

takecare,
pixie xx

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