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Array ( [sid] => 72974 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Was'nt meant to be [time] => 2004-11-24 10:23:24 [hometext] => [bodytext] => why do I hide the fact
that I'm not ok
why do I assume
my problems will go away
few understand me
the others they dont know
no one can comprehend
so this means I'm letting go
these are my last few words
to anyone who cares
I'm sitting here all alone
wishing you were here
but I guess it was'nt meant to be
I'm sorry I had to do this
but somehow it had to end
I have to finish what I had started
I have to finish what I had begun
so this wont happen again
I'll be gone
but I'll still live on
in the memories that we had
Its not your fault that I had done this
so dont worry and be sad
tell my family that I'm sorry
and the few friends I have tell them to
you tried your best
and so did I
but you and I both knew
that someday
I'll be through
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 36 [informant] => alwys2nv [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Was'nt meant to be

Contributed by alwys2nv on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 10:23:24 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

why do I hide the fact
that I'm not ok
why do I assume
my problems will go away
few understand me
the others they dont know
no one can comprehend
so this means I'm letting go
these are my last few words
to anyone who cares
I'm sitting here all alone
wishing you were here
but I guess it was'nt meant to be
I'm sorry I had to do this
but somehow it had to end
I have to finish what I had started
I have to finish what I had begun
so this wont happen again
I'll be gone
but I'll still live on
in the memories that we had
Its not your fault that I had done this
so dont worry and be sad
tell my family that I'm sorry
and the few friends I have tell them to
you tried your best
and so did I
but you and I both knew
that someday
I'll be through

Copyright © alwys2nv ... [ 2004-11-24 10:23:24]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Was'nt meant to be (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 10:27:40 AM AEST
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bro this is great...i know all these words so well...few understand me also....such a great write and so powerful...

please comment on my work too
summer

Re: Was'nt meant to be (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 10:30:59 AM AEST
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sad and moving, very powerful,

pixie xx

Re: Was'nt meant to be (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 07:20:39 PM AEST
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excellent, powerful, gripping, and emotional write.

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