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Array ( [sid] => 72916 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Uninhibited [time] => 2004-11-23 22:18:54 [hometext] => For my special guy, on the day we met [bodytext] => As you look at me from across the room
I see the gleam in your eye
It's a bewildering look of seduction
That makes me feel sky high
But we are merely strangers
Who have met briefly before
A simple smile from you to me
Makes my heart soar
Then you take me by the hand
Asking me to dance
You hold me into your body
Thus putting me in a trance
And then before we know it
We are back at your place
The fire's burning brightly
Reflecting upon your face
I can see deep into your soul
And what you want from me
We spend the remainder of the night
In a state of exctasy
And through your bedroom window
Beats the shining sun
We spend the morning hours
Contemplating what we've done
We don't regret what happened
Although it wasn't planned
But we'll spend the rest of Eternity
Writting love letters in the sand. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Tamara [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Uninhibited

Contributed by Tamara on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 10:18:54 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

As you look at me from across the room
I see the gleam in your eye
It's a bewildering look of seduction
That makes me feel sky high
But we are merely strangers
Who have met briefly before
A simple smile from you to me
Makes my heart soar
Then you take me by the hand
Asking me to dance
You hold me into your body
Thus putting me in a trance
And then before we know it
We are back at your place
The fire's burning brightly
Reflecting upon your face
I can see deep into your soul
And what you want from me
We spend the remainder of the night
In a state of exctasy
And through your bedroom window
Beats the shining sun
We spend the morning hours
Contemplating what we've done
We don't regret what happened
Although it wasn't planned
But we'll spend the rest of Eternity
Writting love letters in the sand.

Copyright © Tamara ... [ 2004-11-23 22:18:54]
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Re: Uninhibited (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 06:31:20 AM AEST
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Truely a great love poem for the one you love.
NICELY WRITTEN NICELY DONE.

~DENNIS~

Re: Uninhibited (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 01:55:11 PM AEST
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lol i cannot believe how amazing this poem made me feel. When I met my gf, it wasnt under these circumstances, but everything made me feel the same way. This was such a strong poem, it really pulled me in, I just love it! Amazing work

Re: Uninhibited (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 08:59:11 PM AEST
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amazing write, i loved it

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