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Array ( [sid] => 72343 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wake up [time] => 2004-11-19 21:44:29 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Wake up to a light filled room
Warming the soul
My first thought is you
Waking up all alone
Such an empty home
Since I left your thoughts

What goes through your head now?

Be gentle
I break down easy

Look
But don't touch
It's the life that I live
Other's break the mold
That I made for them

Trip and fall
Face first in your guilt
You feel guilty for things
You can't remember anymore

Round off the edges
Don't cut open your heart
Your blood will run dry
Flake
Then blow away
Just as mine does everyday

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Wake up

Contributed by the_story_of_the_year on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 09:44:29 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Wake up to a light filled room
Warming the soul
My first thought is you
Waking up all alone
Such an empty home
Since I left your thoughts

What goes through your head now?

Be gentle
I break down easy

Look
But don't touch
It's the life that I live
Other's break the mold
That I made for them

Trip and fall
Face first in your guilt
You feel guilty for things
You can't remember anymore

Round off the edges
Don't cut open your heart
Your blood will run dry
Flake
Then blow away
Just as mine does everyday

Copyright © the_story_of_the_year ... [ 2004-11-19 21:44:29]
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Re: Wake up (User Rating: 1 )
by daydreamer22 on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 09:48:28 PM AEST
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great job...this is a terrific piece...keep it up

Awaiting your next...
~*ME*~

Re: Wake up (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 10:10:31 PM AEST
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excellent write. mind blowing with its excellence.

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