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Array ( [sid] => 72297 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Does He Love Me Back? [time] => 2004-11-19 16:32:54 [hometext] => This poem is about this guy that I like. My sister is in love with him, but she's 10 and he's 14. I'm 16. He says he's too old for her and it's true. Him, his cousin, and I are the only ones that know I like him. I just wrote this poem cause Iike him. [bodytext] => Every Friday after school,
I see you standing there looking so cool,

Every time I look at you, you smile at me,
A smile worth walking a million miles to see,

That day I first saw you, I remember so well,
You gave me a feeling, so strange, I almost fell,

Everyday I search for signs to see,
If you really do care for me,

Everyday I wish you’d talk to me,
If you did, how wonderful it would be,

Every time I leave the band hall,
I wish I’d be brave and give you my number to call,

But more and more everyday I begin to see,
That being brave is really not me,

Everyday I wait for you to prove,
That you’re brave enough to make a move,

I wish you’d get my number and call me on the phone,
So I can find out that I’m really not alone,

I didn’t think it would take this much time,
To find out that love truly is blind,

Because now I’m going out with another guy,
But if I spend another month with him I think I’ll
die,

I’m not being a hater,
We just don’t really know each other,

and he never quits calling me on the phone,
even though I shouldn't be, I'm still very alone,

I wish so much that you could see,
How much you really mean to me,

The only thing I wish I could do,
Is be able to talk to you,

But my sister is in love with you,
And I think I am too,

Every night I lay awake thinking of you,
Wondering if you’re thinking about me too,

And every evening until the sky turns black,
I lay here wondering, “Does he love me back?” [comments] => 2 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 33 [informant] => Niccy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )
Does He Love Me Back?

Contributed by Niccy on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 04:32:54 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove



Every Friday after school,
I see you standing there looking so cool,

Every time I look at you, you smile at me,
A smile worth walking a million miles to see,

That day I first saw you, I remember so well,
You gave me a feeling, so strange, I almost fell,

Everyday I search for signs to see,
If you really do care for me,

Everyday I wish you’d talk to me,
If you did, how wonderful it would be,

Every time I leave the band hall,
I wish I’d be brave and give you my number to call,

But more and more everyday I begin to see,
That being brave is really not me,

Everyday I wait for you to prove,
That you’re brave enough to make a move,

I wish you’d get my number and call me on the phone,
So I can find out that I’m really not alone,

I didn’t think it would take this much time,
To find out that love truly is blind,

Because now I’m going out with another guy,
But if I spend another month with him I think I’ll
die,

I’m not being a hater,
We just don’t really know each other,

and he never quits calling me on the phone,
even though I shouldn't be, I'm still very alone,

I wish so much that you could see,
How much you really mean to me,

The only thing I wish I could do,
Is be able to talk to you,

But my sister is in love with you,
And I think I am too,

Every night I lay awake thinking of you,
Wondering if you’re thinking about me too,

And every evening until the sky turns black,
I lay here wondering, “Does he love me back?”




Copyright © Niccy ... [ 2004-11-19 16:32:54]
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Re: Does He Love Me Back? (User Rating: 1 )
by AbnormalPunk on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 04:52:41 PM AEST
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great poem... but honestly... your to young to know what love is... trust me... i was the same way as you... great write though...


Re: Does He Love Me Back? (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 07:05:16 AM AEST
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pay no mind to the comment above cause no one is to young to know what love is.
but do remember this , time won't wait for your indecision and this guy probably won't wait eitheir
good luck and I hope you get him and by the way I enjoyed the poem very much.




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