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Array ( [sid] => 72235 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the end of the end [time] => 2004-11-19 06:56:20 [hometext] => [bodytext] => how could I love
someone
who doesn't even care
someone who left me
becuase the distance was there
and when i moved you shined your light on me...

You were mad...
I could see the anger in your eyes
I could see the trail of tears you cried
but why should I be there for you
when you weren't there for me

And now you say
that your still in love with me
and if that's true why did you break up with me
if you didn't want to you shouldn't of did it in the first place

Funny you thought that I wouldn't move
and i told myself that all along
but we were wrong
I can love again
and i should
if you don't want as i want you
more than friends
more than friends
we'll never ever cross that line again
so when i see and you see me
it's the beginning of goodbye
And the end of the end [comments] => 2 [counter] => 252 [topic] => 48 [informant] => elatednbliss [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

the end of the end

Contributed by elatednbliss on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 06:56:20 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

how could I love
someone
who doesn't even care
someone who left me
becuase the distance was there
and when i moved you shined your light on me...

You were mad...
I could see the anger in your eyes
I could see the trail of tears you cried
but why should I be there for you
when you weren't there for me

And now you say
that your still in love with me
and if that's true why did you break up with me
if you didn't want to you shouldn't of did it in the first place

Funny you thought that I wouldn't move
and i told myself that all along
but we were wrong
I can love again
and i should
if you don't want as i want you
more than friends
more than friends
we'll never ever cross that line again
so when i see and you see me
it's the beginning of goodbye
And the end of the end

Copyright © elatednbliss ... [ 2004-11-19 06:56:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: the end of the end (User Rating: 1 )
by alexb on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 09:33:09 AM AEST
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your poems make me look like a 3rd grader, so basically im saying you write great poems

Re: the end of the end (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 04:02:05 PM AEST
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this was really good. I liked the part where u talked about teh fact that if they werent there for u, why should u b there for them. I've been in that situation a number of times and your poem just seemed to speak to me. Again, this was a really gud poem.

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