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Array ( [sid] => 72199 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => There's Something Missing... [time] => 2004-11-18 21:52:24 [hometext] => Ladies and gentlemen... do me a great favor... read back into my 172 posts and then u tell me what's missing in my life? Read my life life story first... it's all there in black and white... get to know me thru my poetry... then tell me... [bodytext] => If the song has ended
And the dance is over
Then why am I still holding on...?

I've looked at where I've been
I'm looking at where I am
And I'm wondering where I'm going...?
Cause there's something missing... in my life

I don't know where or when I lost it or even if I ever had it
I just know... there's something missing...

I've got family and friends
Who love me this I know
Even with all the things I've said and done
I know they love me unconditional so
Just like the Good Book says we should
Still there's something missing... in my life

I just can't put my finger on it at this time
If the song has truly ended
And the dance is finally over
Then why am I still holding on...?
Am I just looking for the something missing... in my life?
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There's Something Missing...

Contributed by kidpoet_213 on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 09:52:24 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

If the song has ended
And the dance is over
Then why am I still holding on...?

I've looked at where I've been
I'm looking at where I am
And I'm wondering where I'm going...?
Cause there's something missing... in my life

I don't know where or when I lost it or even if I ever had it
I just know... there's something missing...

I've got family and friends
Who love me this I know
Even with all the things I've said and done
I know they love me unconditional so
Just like the Good Book says we should
Still there's something missing... in my life

I just can't put my finger on it at this time
If the song has truly ended
And the dance is finally over
Then why am I still holding on...?
Am I just looking for the something missing... in my life?

Copyright © kidpoet_213 ... [ 2004-11-18 21:52:24]
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Re: There's Something Missing... (User Rating: 1 )
by sandy_poetrygodslove on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 10:47:34 PM AEST
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great write.. no your just in the season of summer, dry and slow and want to see some snow lol.. we all go through dry lands. wondering why and when we will get out again..

Re: There's Something Missing... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 08:32:23 AM AEST
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if you have friends and family you need no more. We all feel as if there is something missing. But we have everything we could ever need and more. People, but me especially, keep holding on 'when the song ends and the dance is truly over' we're trying to hold on to memories and things in the past. so when we can no longer hold on, that leaves a void

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