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I did live before,
Slowly eroding,
I don't want it anymore,
An errand for my " mates,"
An error for myself,
It's getting smaller and smaller,
Just like a little elf,
I'm trying really hard,
I'm doing what i can,
I cannot give in this easy,
I'll act more of a man,
All the sugar, fags and junkfood,
Was making me feel slump,
Like a couch potatoe,
A lazy little flunk,
Gradually I'm getting taller,
And realising my wicked way,
There is no good in looking back,
'Cos today's another day. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 269 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Dan666 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 16 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

An Unhealthy Life Style

Contributed by Dan666 on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 06:58:31 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

An unhealthy life style,
I did live before,
Slowly eroding,
I don't want it anymore,
An errand for my " mates,"
An error for myself,
It's getting smaller and smaller,
Just like a little elf,
I'm trying really hard,
I'm doing what i can,
I cannot give in this easy,
I'll act more of a man,
All the sugar, fags and junkfood,
Was making me feel slump,
Like a couch potatoe,
A lazy little flunk,
Gradually I'm getting taller,
And realising my wicked way,
There is no good in looking back,
'Cos today's another day.

Copyright © Dan666 ... [ 2004-11-18 06:58:31]
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Re: An Unhealthy Life Style (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 07:10:16 AM AEST
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At least you are willing to stand tall and walk the long mile of cleaning up your life...there are many out there that say,,,but never do.
Awesome poem, showing true strength in writing about your life and how you feel.cool poem and well composed. I hope you achieve the renewal you so much want in life.

Re: An Unhealthy Life Style (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 11:43:58 AM AEST
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Fair play to you Dan, it's easy to slide downwards but a lot harder to climb back up,
all you gotta do now is keep on climbing!

Johnny.

Re: An Unhealthy Life Style (User Rating: 1 )
by AliB on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 04:40:20 AM AEST
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In the past couple of months you have done fantastically well. I am extremely proud of you for realising, in your own time, that things had to change, it certainly paying off now isn't it?
Another great write Dan, well done, keep up the good work!!

Ali xx (mum)

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