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Array ( [sid] => 71945 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => walk alone [time] => 2004-11-17 13:49:56 [hometext] => to the best and busiest friend ever [bodytext] => I wait for you
to come and talk
I wait for you
to share my walk

but you don't come
I talk to stone
and you don't share
I walk alone

In all my life
I wait for a friend
but every beginning
must have an end

no matter where
in the world you are
no matter how
long and far

I'll always call
and tell you I care
I'll always be
waiting .. there

I check my email
everyday I do
but always the same
nothing from you

I think of you
and need to cry
but how do I
you're not nearby

[comments] => 6 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 32 [informant] => kaosar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 22 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

walk alone

Contributed by kaosar on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:49:56 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I wait for you
to come and talk
I wait for you
to share my walk

but you don't come
I talk to stone
and you don't share
I walk alone

In all my life
I wait for a friend
but every beginning
must have an end

no matter where
in the world you are
no matter how
long and far

I'll always call
and tell you I care
I'll always be
waiting .. there

I check my email
everyday I do
but always the same
nothing from you

I think of you
and need to cry
but how do I
you're not nearby

Copyright © kaosar ... [ 2004-11-17 13:49:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: walk alone (User Rating: 1 )
by neglected1 on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:53:11 PM AEST
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... wonderful write.. its hard having a friend that cant share times with you.. but its better than not having a friend at all isnt it?..

i enjoyed reading this.. your words flow very nicely

~neglected1~

Re: walk alone (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:53:26 PM AEST
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awwww maybe you should show this poem to your friend *hugs* it was very emotional and sad,

pixie xx

Re: walk alone (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 02:29:41 PM AEST
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i feel this way sometime about my best friend....sometimes i feel as tho hes never there no matter how bad i need him....this is an excellent poem...great write

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

Re: walk alone (User Rating: 1 )
by N0body on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 04:01:20 PM AEST
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I liked it, but i think if you got rid of 'i check me e-mail....' stanza, it would improve your poem. Gj!

Re: walk alone (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 11:41:07 PM AEST
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absolutely gorgeous, i love this poem:) hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: walk alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 09:45:22 AM AEST
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a less complex format that somehow still conveys a wonderfully sad message...well done!

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