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And how I’m always wrong

I hate how they always whisper
And say it’s not about me

I hate how everyone predicts
And never ask what’s on my mind

I hate that they say it just has to be this
When really it is nothing like that

I hate how I can’t be alone
You’ll always by my side

I hate the way you look at me
Like I’m a disgrace to society

I hate how hard I try to smile
And nothing spreads across my face

I’m to covered in too much madness
Depression you can’t see

But I’m sorry I can’t make you happy
No matter what I do to try
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Hate

Contributed by BlackAngel on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 05:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I hate how everyone concludes
And how I’m always wrong

I hate how they always whisper
And say it’s not about me

I hate how everyone predicts
And never ask what’s on my mind

I hate that they say it just has to be this
When really it is nothing like that

I hate how I can’t be alone
You’ll always by my side

I hate the way you look at me
Like I’m a disgrace to society

I hate how hard I try to smile
And nothing spreads across my face

I’m to covered in too much madness
Depression you can’t see

But I’m sorry I can’t make you happy
No matter what I do to try

Copyright Â© BlackAngel ... [ 2002-11-21 17:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 05:57:06 PM AEST
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Ooh I like this. Love the change in tone at the very end, it's very effective. I hate all those things too. :)

~ MoonlitAngel

Re: Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by Fwog on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 06:01:25 PM AEST
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Hello BlackAngel,
So sorry to see and feel your pain, the place you are in is a dark, angry, lonely place. I only hope you don't linger there too long.
Depression really sucks, I've suffered with it to varying degrees for most of my life. It always seems to be lying just below the surface and every now and then it raises it's ugly head and grabs me.
Thanks for sharing these thoughts.
Fwog

Re: Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 07:58:53 PM AEST
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I agree with Fwog it is a dark
and lonely place as i have dealt
with feeling this way most of my
life, It will definately creep up on
you when you least expect it to
Thanks for sharing this it took me
back in time. I enjoyed it
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by adsalamon on Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 08:40:26 PM AEST
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me like this :)

Re: Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 04:47:59 PM AEST
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Wow, I liked this very much. I loved the lines, "I hate how I can't be alone, You'll always be by my side." My mom is always worrying that I will cut and stays home so I wont, but she doesnt realize it just makes me feel worse. The one thing I dont like is the date you submitted it and how there are no more newer poems from you! Come on submit some more!!!!!! lol

- Bobo (Joel)

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